getting better, keep it up. Learn how to shade cleaner.. I don't want to see any lines.
agree^^ definatly gettin better with em big bend but fer sure shading is a bit down hill keep em comin tho there gettin better
@ shell703- nuttin to special man no ones critiqing it cuz its lamee no affence but it looks just like the A on my keyboard except sloppier and with color haha
On the bottom one my apple green was dead so the S didn't get colored correctly =/. Crit em.
@shell 703 no ididnt say it wasnt real haha i meant to put its not really* original
@synone liken the bottoms style but not really liken the k or e and maybe the r lol but still diggen them i guess keep em comin there gettin better
Last edited by Wonky; 12-15-2011 at 03:45 PM.
@ wonky i like the bright colors idk about the lettering tho man wack extensions coming from no where and did you trace the bottom one or somethin cuz there both like theeeee exacttt same just different color haha the bubbles are even in the same spot.....go more simple man do tons of drawings not just one and then trace over it again and again just recoloring it gotta get better and you wont that way
@dankbuds looks pretty good for a simple structures all there just not diggen the D keep em comin tho man youll get better
oh I shoulda said I fixed that bottom one in Photoshop / tried different colours and straightened the image out. By the extensions you mean the sill arrows coming out all over the place?
and as for smudging, invest in some of this, really worth it: http://www.krylon.com/products/workable_fixatif/
Yo Skate I think the top picture straight letter might be the best straight letter I've seen you do. Real improvement, but you still need to be working on your letters.
Your tag and your throw need major renovation though. It doesn't really look like you've changed anything on your tag.
what do you think i need to change on my tag?
You are trying to force style into your letters in a way that makes it not flow as well. the letter that needs the most work is your Y in my opinion.
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MN - I think it'll look better if the loop on the U were on the outside of the U
Skate - Try keeping in mind bar width consistency throughout each letter
HAER - The bars on each of the letters are different, I don't know if that was deliberate or not and I don't think the C flows with the rest of the piece. I think it'll look better if there was some kind of consistent font style throughout the whole piece, or if you want to keep it varied like that I'd emphasize it more, like make it each letter drastically different, but each letter its self should have a consistent bar type throughout the individual letter. Also, the way the letters are set up, the H should be making a shadow on about half of the A ect., etc...