like to see the freestyles shell nice simples there comin along
like to see the freestyles shell nice simples there comin along
aight thankx shell ill keep it in mind next time and yes they were deliberality drawn different like that
Working on my structure - this is supposed to be a simple, but I still fucked about with it. Worth inking? I kinda like it (it's pay day today!)
@shell. like the 3rd pic
@wonky.. nice. would be better if bars wasnt broken so much
crits?
Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr
Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr
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Too many chips and breaks? Maybe i'll cut a few back - do they break letter structure? I like yours there sir, the second one looks sweet but I can't read it.
bigbend: Using a pencil make 12 1"x1" boxes that are connected in a row (very ligthly). Then starting at black fade to white. Try to have a smooth even fade from one to the next with no hard pencil lines. Try holding the pencil under hand so you get more surface of the graphite on the paper.
I really need to stop rushing these... =/
No, you just need to make cleaner lines. It's all practice.
Originally Posted by PREA672
What do you reckon to my sketch Phil? Went back to simpler style, and really worked hard on structural integrity... Too many breaks?
(I also accepted my place as toy)
It's not that there are too many, there's too much space between your breaks. Make them less exaggerated, and it'll look better. Make your P bend like the Y. The A should be completed on the bottom, or else it looks like some weird letter that doesn't exist. And try not to sketch your letters. Use single, clean lines. It'll help you when you're painting, too.
Yeh I made some adjustments already - it's sketched because I was trying really hard to get structure right. I'm gonna rub it right back and go again in clean single lines. I have fixed the a, I might have to do some work on the curves. There is so much more to getting this shit looking just right than I realised. I now realise what a fucking toy I am lol
You think the chip on the bottom of the a curl needs to go and that should link?
Now I inked the outline, I realize what you were saying about the breaks. I fucked up the Y because it doesn't look like one anymore...
Last edited by Phat 2; 12-16-2011 at 01:27 PM.
for the battle thread
Coloured it - made a pigs ear of it. Looks shit. Still, i learnt how to balls up decent structure with breaks. Onwards and upwards.
lil ruff draft warm up today. need to do this type stuff more often na mean.
wonky - not bad bad bro, drop the extra stuff for now. keep the letters solid.
crushin - allways unique
syn - you might try getting consistant letters before adding on color and 3d
I smoke Vega
tryin to get this shit right side up... wtf
I smoke Vega
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crits?
lolwut
That last kirsty is fresh
I Was Rockin Snap Backs Before Mac Miller Did.
ok, so i literally started learning graffiti about an hour and a half ago so dont expect perfection (ive seen so many pretentious and arrogant posts here from 'eletists')
but yeah, its pretty generic but i aint done it long enough to adopt my own style and flow yet
crits please
^^ work in progress
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