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    Quote Originally Posted by C-SONE View Post
    Crits, feel your letters more. Give them emotion, give them limbs. Think of them as people. Come up with a backstory, a family and medical history. n occupation. Did your letters grow up in a nice sensible suburb? Do they work in a car wash? Do they live on the streets? Think bout your letters mood and responsibilities within the set. Are they proppng up, pulling over or tangling with other letters. With their limbs make that important. Don't think of the outside, think of the underneath. The physical structure of the thing.
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    Wonkey, I'm those are legit. Not really feeling the colors on the last one though

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    @wonkey- ur letters have good structure, but ur hiding them to much, the S and the E are way to far under the others, try spacing them out a bit more
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hick94 View Post
    king ever hear less is more? same applies to graff
    simple i did today
    Holy shit Hick finally changed it up I'm so happy....

    literally the first two ever done with more than three colors on paper.....yay christmas
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    Speak show me a straight letter no extensions no bullshit id honestly be more impressed
    Inside - Your colours are clean but letters are shit (no offense) work on the individual flow of the letter i mean the bottom of that S is scaring me man
    Tempo - Make bars the same width THROUGHOUT THE PIECE! SYMETRY (idc how its spelled) IS KEY!


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    I definately need to space my letters out. But shit letters? Wow. Cheers!
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    page is looking decent here's another quick ting


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    Nice structure Know. Finish it!
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    I'd work on the e but that may fuck with the spacing too much

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    shoulda left out those gay extensions
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    Should have left the page unblemished with such a fine female and and leave out your raunchy letters.

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    @sadgeh-drop the extensions and work on full letters
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    Tops the only one worth the paper its drawn on wonky. Pretty nice effort at simplifying. This IMO is a hundred times more visually speaking then that crap you've been dead set to add to your other letters. Scoot the s and the I in the middle just a click or two away from each other because they are a little to tight. Other then that I can digg you're color scheme and no 3d or drops on your letters

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    Cheers and thanks for the input. I find it mega hard not to add arrows and shit. I love old school rough, cartoony Graf. I appreciate all crits, I'm trying to do at least one or two Bbook pieces a day until I get it. Not tryin to do any wild style bullshit at all.
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