Blackbooks

[Wonky]

Less is infinitely more, until you need to know more, and you will know when that is. It isn't now.

[Tempo718]

Thanks I think Tempo. Any crits / comments?

to get critical,rather see that same thing in paint on canvas.

[Wonky]

did this tonight.... not happy with fill..

[Tempo718]

Wonky - Inside..?

[Tempo718]

Crits, feel your letters more. Give them emotion, give them limbs. Think of them as people. Come up with a backstory, a family and medical history. n occupation. Did your letters grow up in a nice sensible suburb? Do they work in a car wash? Do they live on the streets? Think bout your letters mood and responsibilities within the set. Are they proppng up, pulling over or tangling with other letters. With their limbs make that important. Don't think of the outside, think of the underneath. The physical structure of the thing.

[VeX'D]

Wonkey, I'm those are legit. Not really feeling the colors on the last one though

[BennyBoii]

@wonkey- ur letters have good structure, but ur hiding them to much, the S and the E are way to far under the others, try spacing them out a bit more

[Skadeem]

king ever hear less is more? same applies to graff
simple i did today

Holy shit Hick finally changed it up I'm so happy....

literally the first two ever done with more than three colors on paper.....yay christmas

[-Sinn-]

Speak show me a straight letter no extensions no bullshit id honestly be more impressed
Inside - Your colours are clean but letters are shit (no offense) work on the individual flow of the letter i mean the bottom of that S is scaring me man
Tempo - Make bars the same width THROUGHOUT THE PIECE! SYMETRY (idc how its spelled) IS KEY!

[Wonky]

I definately need to space my letters out. But shit letters? Wow. Cheers!

[knowtheledge]

page is looking decent here's another quick ting

[Wonky]

Nice structure Know. Finish it!

[Skadeem]

I'd work on the e but that may fuck with the spacing too much

[sadgeh]

Crits?

[emace1]

IMG_0114 by sirduke!, on Flickr

[dankbudz]

shoulda left out those gay extensions

[Mori]

Should have left the page unblemished with such a fine female and and leave out your raunchy letters.

[dmot_snts]

[BennyBoii]

@sadgeh-drop the extensions and work on full letters

[dankbudz]

unfinished