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    Bench: You've got some seriously sick pages there.

    Looking for some crits on these. They are old, but looking for ideas on advancement.
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    I need some legit crits, my ideas are so boring and suck.Blockbuster cam out decent i think, and the kansr is for the battle. the nakd that looks like nako was a quick effortless piece but decided id flick it anyways cuz i sorta like the feel, idk
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    Colors: Try leaning your letters the other direction. Also try tall an narrow.... Just stretch and bend away. That Kansr isn't bad.

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    Colors- those aren't that boron compared to most others shit. some good practice

    PETER- get a peter griffin avatar. you should just do work on simples if you are stuck on development. fuck around with basic styles and just draw.
    that sevr is coo



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    Dank: I like where that piece is going. Try fucking with bar widths. Think of how a chisel tip marker looks and fuck with that. Also try leaning your letters to the left a little. Maybe go taller and with thicker bars. For the CDXX try making the tops super fat and the bottoms super narrow.... just some thoughts. I keep forgetting to flick that Dank piece I did years ago.
    Edit: That skull is cool. I would like to see you do it more candy skull style. Day of the Dead like.

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    thanks seder, heres my crits on your piece. It seems like the bottom bar of your E has too many kinks, id just get rid of the weird extensions to the bottom bar of the E. Your S looks like its bent in too many ways, maybe try a little simpler S? Your definitly moving in the right direction though, i like your style. the right leg of the R looks a little awkward also. And this is just a tip i use sometimes to help with the flow of my piece, i usually draw a line on top and on the bottom of my letters to make sure none of my letters go past the line so that they are all the same size, but thats just what i think. In all i like your style and your moving in the right direction, but keep staying siimple. Oh yeah and one last thing, maybe you could add a force to your piece, it looks a little bare haha. keep it up though

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    thanks for all the crits dudes, both are hella useful.
    drew that skull with a rebel8 dia de los muertos shirt in mind, didn't show through much, that type of style is dope though.
    you should post up the dank piece, you keep makin me wonder what that looks like, but you never post it!
    also the piece is unfinished, i at least know to slap some 3d and outline on. I'm just a lazy fuck and post my shit before its done.
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    oh wasnt sure though because sometimes i do pieces with just the outline, like yours. do you want to exchange seder?

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    Quote Originally Posted by snal View Post
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    some sketches of mine let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home
    some advices?

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    yeah veko go simpler. do straight simples, that stuff doesnt look too great but if you just do some simple pieces for a while youll notice your stuffs gonna get better overtime

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    Snal: what he said. look at Dank and Color's simples I have a few up there too. If you start out with basic square letters you can start to bend and stretch them like the naked. You've got to build the foundation of the house before the roof.

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    did these over the weekend...internet been shit latley takes ages to upload pics...
    veko i agree with colors draw keyboard letters to get a idea of bars...


    critz are always welcomed

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    Props bench antik naked n seder lookin ill


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    damn kwu feeling your style. the only thing i really have to say is the N looks a little awkward and parts of the A because the bars get really skinny compared to the KH.i like it man good work
    Edit: and your KH looks bigger than the N, the n gets really small. and the left leg of the A's a little awkward. Just what i think
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    aha thanks dude flicked it on an angle thats why it might look bigger respect for the input tho homes

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?
    Cheers man, yeah for sure. Its Mues right?

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    Simps

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    just a quick 2 letter, decided to do it in lowercase cuz im always rockin the uppercase.
    crits would be awesome
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    And this is a piece i just did but im only flickin the na because im in love with the n on this piece

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    Make the K a little bigger it looks all squashed up.

    just sketched this up, i need some new markers it looks fucked with just the outlines.


 

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