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    thanks seder, heres my crits on your piece. It seems like the bottom bar of your E has too many kinks, id just get rid of the weird extensions to the bottom bar of the E. Your S looks like its bent in too many ways, maybe try a little simpler S? Your definitly moving in the right direction though, i like your style. the right leg of the R looks a little awkward also. And this is just a tip i use sometimes to help with the flow of my piece, i usually draw a line on top and on the bottom of my letters to make sure none of my letters go past the line so that they are all the same size, but thats just what i think. In all i like your style and your moving in the right direction, but keep staying siimple. Oh yeah and one last thing, maybe you could add a force to your piece, it looks a little bare haha. keep it up though

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    thanks for all the crits dudes, both are hella useful.
    drew that skull with a rebel8 dia de los muertos shirt in mind, didn't show through much, that type of style is dope though.
    you should post up the dank piece, you keep makin me wonder what that looks like, but you never post it!
    also the piece is unfinished, i at least know to slap some 3d and outline on. I'm just a lazy fuck and post my shit before its done.
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    oh wasnt sure though because sometimes i do pieces with just the outline, like yours. do you want to exchange seder?

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    Quote Originally Posted by snal View Post
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    some sketches of mine let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home
    some advices?

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    yeah veko go simpler. do straight simples, that stuff doesnt look too great but if you just do some simple pieces for a while youll notice your stuffs gonna get better overtime

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    Snal: what he said. look at Dank and Color's simples I have a few up there too. If you start out with basic square letters you can start to bend and stretch them like the naked. You've got to build the foundation of the house before the roof.

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    did these over the weekend...internet been shit latley takes ages to upload pics...
    veko i agree with colors draw keyboard letters to get a idea of bars...


    critz are always welcomed

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    Props bench antik naked n seder lookin ill


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    damn kwu feeling your style. the only thing i really have to say is the N looks a little awkward and parts of the A because the bars get really skinny compared to the KH.i like it man good work
    Edit: and your KH looks bigger than the N, the n gets really small. and the left leg of the A's a little awkward. Just what i think
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    aha thanks dude flicked it on an angle thats why it might look bigger respect for the input tho homes

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?
    Cheers man, yeah for sure. Its Mues right?

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    Simps

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    just a quick 2 letter, decided to do it in lowercase cuz im always rockin the uppercase.
    crits would be awesome
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    And this is a piece i just did but im only flickin the na because im in love with the n on this piece

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    Make the K a little bigger it looks all squashed up.

    just sketched this up, i need some new markers it looks fucked with just the outlines.

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    crits?

    Picture 216 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    well that should probably go in the throwie thread but hmmm im bad at throws so i guess ill try to crit it.well, i think the g looks wicked weird like the whole thing, and the bubble part of it on the left is too big in my opinion, and your throw is sorta wavy, not saying make it even and flat but dont have it go all over the place. Then again you dont have to listen to this because i never do throws

    And this is just what my rip big L piece looks like right now. this was sort half assed so im going to do another later in the week that will be waay better. But for now, anyone wanna crit this before i go any further?

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    RIP BIG L
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    i raped the forums today. well heres the finished product. has a green force but you cants really see it
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    oh yeah and i didnt do it this little dude did it
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    feelin the letters on this page guys. no lie
    I smoke Vega


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    got bored,

    colors i dig tha RIP BIG but the el if its EL or LL or what. just looks like twirls. but somehow i new what it said before i read what you wrote... haha

    can't really crit that SPRAE, i liked ur other stuff you posted more
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