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    crits?

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    well that should probably go in the throwie thread but hmmm im bad at throws so i guess ill try to crit it.well, i think the g looks wicked weird like the whole thing, and the bubble part of it on the left is too big in my opinion, and your throw is sorta wavy, not saying make it even and flat but dont have it go all over the place. Then again you dont have to listen to this because i never do throws

    And this is just what my rip big L piece looks like right now. this was sort half assed so im going to do another later in the week that will be waay better. But for now, anyone wanna crit this before i go any further?

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    RIP BIG L
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    i raped the forums today. well heres the finished product. has a green force but you cants really see it
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    oh yeah and i didnt do it this little dude did it
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    feelin the letters on this page guys. no lie
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    got bored,

    colors i dig tha RIP BIG but the el if its EL or LL or what. just looks like twirls. but somehow i new what it said before i read what you wrote... haha

    can't really crit that SPRAE, i liked ur other stuff you posted more
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    Dank - 3D is looking NIIICEEEE, I dig your E's and R's the most. Keep 'er rocking.

    Lil' Freestyle during class. E got hidden to much.

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    ^^lookin good, def. improvement since the last ones i seen
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    sketch for one of the guys who got me into graff


    and a quick lil NOA

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wonky View Post
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    Bump for crits. Obviously quite simple but in working on structure and flow...
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    Skewr: Best todate for sure. You're right, the E got hidden a bit... but all in all it has solid structure and flow. I like the shape and form of the letters as well. Nothing seems way out of place.
    Inside: Still struggling with your S's (don't worry they are a huge bitch. I avoid them) The bottom one is getting there. Do a few pages of just S's.
    Toops: Both look good. That E is sick imo. Good to see you postin' up.

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    Yeh, I like the top S better but everyone tells me my S's are shit. I'll work on it.
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    It's hard to get proportions and bends to look good. It's easily one of the hardest letters for me. Anything round really. Just keep fuckin' with'em. Look at how a bunch of writters fuck with'em. Do some handstyle ones and use them to outline around. It doesn't help it's right in the middle of the word so a lot of direction is directed to it. Keep it up. (the reason I don't like the top S looks like a fat gut hanging over a belt.... it's just missing a belly button and hair.)

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    the letter S is a tough one all depends what style ur rocking to how hard it is ive always been able to get a half decent flow with my s's but then again when i started writing me n a mate both had the same style so we both helped get it right

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    One thing I've learned and it helps me is on my S's I tend to start the Inside first, Like the holes, those determine how the entire S looks structure wise (this doesn't include extensions and what not.)

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    yeah thats what i used to do when i painted a word with the letter s in it

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    I'll ditch the name lol.

    Heres a mini page I did on a train journey

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    That S in the Inside on the right of the page is decent. I like that inside. nice page.

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    haha just reminded me of the time some people on the bus got talking to me coz i was sketching and told me all bout when they used to paint before i was born good times, good times

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    sketch says 'Dash'


 

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