Blackbooks

[Tempo718]

dank - any a more charactors on deck yoga I could be luke pahlease g cause u got that on lock imo.
mues - your progression is consistant dont vexx. easy.
every1 else - stay ya heads up but dont post something til. it is your satisfaction.
i think going back and reanalyzing your bars and etc.
can in prove your flow if you do three in a row but something different n' more complex as you move to 1,2,3
(1) Being simple could benefit your patience also and just enjoy when you see what eventually progresses
into something a little differnt that what the 1st rendition was.

[Tempo718]

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I like where he going with this uh.. mainly first one the one after is eh... but uh yeah that otha one do it 3 times in a row se post it plz?

[dankbudz]

got no idea what you just said about characters


quickie sketch before i pass out.. maybe you can see it.. bout to color it tomorrow
the R is busted as fuck

[kwu]

nice seder

[MN Nice]

Those colors are illin!!^ Nice grey detail on the letters. I'm not so sure about your extensions though, you seem to be going out of your way to make them.

@dank - can't really see the letters too well, post it up inked. Thanks for the good looks on mine though.

This is what I meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.

[2mor]

[QUOTE=Wonky;1769163]A little 2B outline I did this morning


most of them letters are hurtinnn...spesh the s. little dragon face is the only thing remotely worth keepin i reckon man, anyways, half coloured. ...colourin was just quick, to be redone .

[dankbudz]

that khan is dope

[Wonky]

[Colors]

Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

this is what i meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.

Lmao XD

[gemer]

@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing

[Colors]

gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha

[SkateJunt]

crits on all these?

Picture 202 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 205 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 206 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 207 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 208 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

[2mor]

not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x

[Tempo718]

roaches ... are ... fast

[kwu]

@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho

[MN Nice]

Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.

Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.

Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E

[gemer]

@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics

freestyle tryin something new

after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it

[dankbudz]

lol, its dope broski. just gotta pay attention to the hights of those letters. i wish those lines were bars thou, i think bars would look better lol

[gemer]

^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude