Home     Graffiti Shop     Forum
Earn / Redeem Credits

Thread: Blackbooks

  1. #111681
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Wonky View Post
    I can't read them Peter
    lol right on. Kristen. They are from 98. The others are from around 2003ish.

    Gemer: Thanks. I've never really taken my art seriously and never took advantage of resources like this to lear the foundations. I just would draw from time to time and that's what happend.

  2. #111682
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Name:  blocks.jpg
Views: 118
Size:  35.0 KBName:  greenantik.jpg
Views: 126
Size:  43.0 KBName:  flames.jpg
Views: 119
Size:  31.7 KBName:  purpleak.jpg
Views: 121
Size:  34.4 KB

  3. #111683
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Name:  dank.jpg
Views: 120
Size:  26.6 KB

    here's that Dank Dank. I was hiding my poor letters behind huge arrows. I got a few free tshirts for it.

  4. #111684

    Default

    naked with that illy stee! and peter finish that purple/blue one it looks rude!


  5. #111685
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Thanks KWU. I was using my friend's colored pencils. I'm going to have to find some that come close to matching. I love the I on that piece. I am diggin' the piece you just posted. I am finding that bottom extention on the last letter confusing. My head is telling me it's Khan, but I am seeing Khao.

  6. #111686
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Beirut, Lebanon
    Posts
    2,846
    Credits
    832
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    practice full page:


    crits are much needed

  7. #111687
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    damn it Phat. I have to get on my phone to see your stuff.... I like the bit on top. I suggest making the bits in the O look more like fangs and use a green to make venom drip from them. Your M for your throw is better, alot better. I forget who mentioned it but I was in agreement that it was too big. The upper handy on the left the M has too many humps. I like the one below it a lot better. The throw V is cool. The one next to it has potential. It seems like your M should be visible in the hole of the O almost. I would use the top of the E to model the top right of the N and M. The blocky piece at the bottom is good. I would like to see it with more care put into it. The handy on the right is nice.Play with that and a capital E if it doesn't work stick with the lowercase it works with the O. I'm not feeling the one with the family guy looking mouth at all. I'd like to see you do a VM throw and some how use Venom's spider logo in something.
    Last edited by PETER; 01-20-2012 at 03:45 PM.

  8. #111688
    Banned
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Posts
    316
    Credits
    515
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    kwu your k is pretty nasty, the extension at the top of the n is a lil weird,
    phat the thing i like most on that is the handstyle at the top

  9. #111689

    Default

    Phat I would say on that bottom straight, actually show the left side of the E, to me that always looks better.

    Just a flick.

    Name:  IMAG0193.jpg
Views: 109
Size:  70.8 KB

  10. #111690
    Banned
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Posts
    316
    Credits
    515
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    skewr i think you should go more simple, and in my opinion i think that w is too covered and the r is too far apart, and those extensions at the bottom of the r, well you could take em out. try some simples

  11. #111691

    Default

    ^ I knew the R wasn't so hot. I've been trying/testing new things, just majority of them seem to fail. I'll rock out some more simples to help my letter development.

  12. #111692
    Banned
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Posts
    316
    Credits
    515
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    dont worry its not terrible haha yeah just do some simples over and over youll notice you change little things everytime and then those develop

  13. #111693
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Beirut, Lebanon
    Posts
    2,846
    Credits
    832
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
    the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

    but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!

  14. #111694
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Beirut
    Posts
    289
    Credits
    1,038
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Name:  26112011121.jpg
Views: 102
Size:  83.3 KB
    dedication............

  15. #111695
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Location
    Texas
    Posts
    2
    Credits
    12
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Name:  1-20-2012 9;22;04 PM eas.jpg
Views: 97
Size:  195.5 KB
    EAS
    sketch i did on the back of my journal
    looking 4 some crits
    Last edited by eas; 01-21-2012 at 01:12 AM.

  16. #111696
    Banned
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Posts
    316
    Credits
    515
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    i hate this so much but i feel the need to post it because besides how awkward it looks i feel like i wanna develop this style. the na isnt too bad in my opinion but the rest disappoints me. Please crit this
    dont crit the week that doesnt count
    Name:  gaynaks.jpg
Views: 91
Size:  23.0 KB
    Last edited by Colors; 01-20-2012 at 11:17 PM.

  17. #111697

    Default

    naked: the top of the k is a little funky and it looks kinda smushed but other than that, it looks prime to me haha.
    Quote Originally Posted by Colors View Post
    hide ya kids, hide ya wife, cuz they raping everybody out here

  18. #111698

    Default

    Name:  hotweek.jpg
Views: 90
Size:  186.9 KB
    crits would be much appreciated.
    Quote Originally Posted by Colors View Post
    hide ya kids, hide ya wife, cuz they raping everybody out here

  19. #111699
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    INDY
    Posts
    1,003
    Credits
    2,003
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
    the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

    but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!
    I know, its just a pain in the ass. The vowels in your throw are a little weak IMO. particularly the e. keep the points at the bottom. you could make them like teeth if you keep'em evenly spaced and give it a little curve. you could even work out another throw to make a bottom jaw.

  20. #111700
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    zim
    Posts
    487
    Credits
    2,033
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    @ venom diggen the throw
    @ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter
    @ physph diggen the bow thing lol
    @ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think
    @ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good
    @ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin

    heres a couple freestyles i did today

    3ds off in both of them a bit
    Name:  scemer one.jpg
Views: 115
Size:  126.4 KB

    not diggen this one at all
    Name:  scemone1.jpg
Views: 113
Size:  160.1 KB
    SEMK ONE


 

Similar Threads

  1. Blackbooks For Sale
    By D Snif in forum Tools and tips
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: 03-03-2007, 06:59 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Back Top