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    damn it Phat. I have to get on my phone to see your stuff.... I like the bit on top. I suggest making the bits in the O look more like fangs and use a green to make venom drip from them. Your M for your throw is better, alot better. I forget who mentioned it but I was in agreement that it was too big. The upper handy on the left the M has too many humps. I like the one below it a lot better. The throw V is cool. The one next to it has potential. It seems like your M should be visible in the hole of the O almost. I would use the top of the E to model the top right of the N and M. The blocky piece at the bottom is good. I would like to see it with more care put into it. The handy on the right is nice.Play with that and a capital E if it doesn't work stick with the lowercase it works with the O. I'm not feeling the one with the family guy looking mouth at all. I'd like to see you do a VM throw and some how use Venom's spider logo in something.
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    kwu your k is pretty nasty, the extension at the top of the n is a lil weird,
    phat the thing i like most on that is the handstyle at the top

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    Phat I would say on that bottom straight, actually show the left side of the E, to me that always looks better.

    Just a flick.

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    skewr i think you should go more simple, and in my opinion i think that w is too covered and the r is too far apart, and those extensions at the bottom of the r, well you could take em out. try some simples

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    ^ I knew the R wasn't so hot. I've been trying/testing new things, just majority of them seem to fail. I'll rock out some more simples to help my letter development.

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    dont worry its not terrible haha yeah just do some simples over and over youll notice you change little things everytime and then those develop

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    thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
    the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

    but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!

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    dedication............

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    EAS
    sketch i did on the back of my journal
    looking 4 some crits
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    i hate this so much but i feel the need to post it because besides how awkward it looks i feel like i wanna develop this style. the na isnt too bad in my opinion but the rest disappoints me. Please crit this
    dont crit the week that doesnt count
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    naked: the top of the k is a little funky and it looks kinda smushed but other than that, it looks prime to me haha.
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    hide ya kids, hide ya wife, cuz they raping everybody out here

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    crits would be much appreciated.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
    the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

    but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!
    I know, its just a pain in the ass. The vowels in your throw are a little weak IMO. particularly the e. keep the points at the bottom. you could make them like teeth if you keep'em evenly spaced and give it a little curve. you could even work out another throw to make a bottom jaw.

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    @ venom diggen the throw
    @ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter
    @ physph diggen the bow thing lol
    @ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think
    @ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good
    @ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin

    heres a couple freestyles i did today

    3ds off in both of them a bit
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    not diggen this one at all
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    SEMK ONE

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    crits wanted

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    loose the arrows the extensions and the a' is really weird..and the s/ not diggen the extension at the bottom at all go more simple man
    SEMK ONE

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    eas i think you should go to the new to graffiti thread and learn bars and the other basics

    and gemer im really feeling the first one, the CEM is nice, but i dont like the s because it is so far off, like the top of it seems to go too far to the left. but the cem is dope
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    I know this is gucked up but I got bored of bubble simples just thought I'd do something completely new. So many structural errors,but I enjoyed drawing it anyway.

    | Liquid + Brick |

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    wonky there are bars everywhere and coming from everything, just do simps and check other writers on how extensions work.

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    wonky: seems like there's a lot of stuff going on, maybe tone it down a bit and drop those extensions.

    heres a few ive finished recently, little bit of variety.

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