here's that Dank Dank. I was hiding my poor letters behind huge arrows. I got a few free tshirts for it.
naked with that illy stee! and peter finish that purple/blue one it looks rude!
Thanks KWU. I was using my friend's colored pencils. I'm going to have to find some that come close to matching. I love the I on that piece. I am diggin' the piece you just posted. I am finding that bottom extention on the last letter confusing. My head is telling me it's Khan, but I am seeing Khao.
practice full page:
crits are much needed
damn it Phat. I have to get on my phone to see your stuff.... I like the bit on top. I suggest making the bits in the O look more like fangs and use a green to make venom drip from them. Your M for your throw is better, alot better. I forget who mentioned it but I was in agreement that it was too big. The upper handy on the left the M has too many humps. I like the one below it a lot better. The throw V is cool. The one next to it has potential. It seems like your M should be visible in the hole of the O almost. I would use the top of the E to model the top right of the N and M. The blocky piece at the bottom is good. I would like to see it with more care put into it. The handy on the right is nice.Play with that and a capital E if it doesn't work stick with the lowercase it works with the O. I'm not feeling the one with the family guy looking mouth at all. I'd like to see you do a VM throw and some how use Venom's spider logo in something.
Last edited by PETER; 01-20-2012 at 02:45 PM.
kwu your k is pretty nasty, the extension at the top of the n is a lil weird,
phat the thing i like most on that is the handstyle at the top
Phat I would say on that bottom straight, actually show the left side of the E, to me that always looks better.
Just a flick.
skewr i think you should go more simple, and in my opinion i think that w is too covered and the r is too far apart, and those extensions at the bottom of the r, well you could take em out. try some simples
^ I knew the R wasn't so hot. I've been trying/testing new things, just majority of them seem to fail. I'll rock out some more simples to help my letter development.
dont worry its not terrible haha yeah just do some simples over and over youll notice you change little things everytime and then those develop
thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.
but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!
sketch i did on the back of my journal
looking 4 some crits
Last edited by eas; 01-21-2012 at 12:12 AM.
i hate this so much but i feel the need to post it because besides how awkward it looks i feel like i wanna develop this style. the na isnt too bad in my opinion but the rest disappoints me. Please crit this
dont crit the week that doesnt count
Last edited by Colors; 01-20-2012 at 10:17 PM.
@ venom diggen the throw
@ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter
@ physph diggen the bow thing lol
@ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think
@ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good
@ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin
heres a couple freestyles i did today
3ds off in both of them a bit
not diggen this one at all