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    the piece that says what i think is blue is the best. do more stuff like that because its simple, but theres some things wrong. the right leg of the u could be brought up more it looks awakward, and fix that b if your using bars those holes shouldnt be so closed and small especially the top one. the e is a good idea but that one is skaetchy, just keep doing simple junk like that. maybe add a force too

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    thanx colors
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    @gemer, why do you call tem freestyles? I can see pencil marks? What does that mean?
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    They're light pen marks to get his bars right.

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    Is that still a freestyle then?
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    posted this on facebook. hope buddy dont blast me again.
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    it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

    did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



    AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch
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    top one is dope^

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    ya same seder nice little 3d effect on the first one and temp the best advice i can say quality over quantity...theres no point in half assin a sketch per day, ive seen better from you...if you dont have time just do one every 2 days or whatever suits you....

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    seder that top one rapes face.
    and tempo im getting like legit pissed haha keep your bars the same width! use bars! look up graffiti for beginners damn

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

    did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



    AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch
    Dank sorry I dont meet your standards bro but I will try harder and maybe one day you'll feel my shit. peace

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    HICK -
    crits on the bottom, save the ink for when you get a realblackbook, i used to to that and i look back and I'm just like fuck, wish i had those colors now. lol

    BUT connect the bars on the H and K and pay attention to bar width, like that fatty C, it should have more of and oval shape cut out of the center. and spacing between letters, you got neg. space in the H and K but crammed the IC in between, you coulda made the I more vertical so there was a bit of space to the left and if you narrowed the bars of the C it wouldn't be half bad.
    hope you understand what i said, but another thing about colors is it is distracting, and if you are trying to improve your letter structure, you can't really look at it as critically if you throw on all these colors that you think are filthy or some shit

    Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that

    COLORS, in case you wanna peep this before 3d is on n shit. also i get more credits for post in it more... lolz imma probably do a few more NAKED cuz its an ill word
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    damn dude that looks tight! haha get all the credits you can... and i might redo yours too, possibly if i dont suck at sketching tonight. that already looks ill without that seder 3d

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    lol thanks man, and foreal, i am getting some free shipping.
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Size:  13.7 KBehh i just like the n. crit this junk if you want, mostly the k because the k is wack.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post

    Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that
    Oh of course I should have expected you to say that. Thanks for your concern anywho

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    @ wonky i call them freestyles because i dont erase
    SEMK ONE

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    breaking this down into 3 parts. Crits are definitely welcome.

    this is my piece without the outline so you can actually see the bleeding letters
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    This is the finished product with the forcefield, but i feel like the forcefeild ruined the whole piece
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    This was my favorite stage of the piece that i should not have given a bad force. Just pretend this is the finished product not the forcefield oneName:  bleedingnakedoutlined.jpg
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    i like the force i think the letters pop a little more , here is one i did for the piece battle

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    holy poop dude that ones sick. im just not a fan of the connections, not saying they are bad i just dont like connections haha. i have no crits dude, all the letters seem nice to me, good job


 

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