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    you mean in every single letter keep the bars all the same width, or you mean my bars are different size in each letter?

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    Your bars are currently fucked up. you should even them out skatejunt. dont have to make them deadstraight but their taper and angle should be consistent.



    Currently trying to bust through a lil writers block. anyone got any crits for me? Not rly liking the top of my last E.
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    can't read that homes^
    Gerb, what they're tryna say is in every letter keep all the bars the same width.. for example I was trying a different style on this one and it looks fucked:



    gonna redo this but any criticism is welcome.. the c looks like an e and every letter is a bust.. I only like the a

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    @Sone - Too many bars for each letter, dumb it down

    @kwu - Your Z looks like an L with a top extension, and your C looks like an E, but that I-A connection is bangin!


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    This page actually isn't filled with shit, I'm so happy.
    Gonna bring it down now
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    trying to develop new simps. total freestyle in the center if you couldn't tell.

    solid mues, don't really know what else to say

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    @Sone - Too many bars for each letter, dumb it down

    @kwu - Your Z looks like an L with a top extension, and your C looks like an E, but that I-A connection is bangin!

    bump. keep sketching speak. Practice with your bars and flow, although I'm not one to talk too much lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
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    You can hate on me all you want ribby, but I don't care. It ain't about beef.

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    Last edited by kwu; 01-27-2012 at 03:22 PM.

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    Some quick shit
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    diggin it, o's coulda been a bit rounder though

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    nachoooooo

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shit Outta Luck View Post
    Some quick shit
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    props to using port adelaide's colours mate

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    my first handstyle. if anyone can tell me what needs to be improved, etc itd be appreciated
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    @yangski-space out some of your letters a little more
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    aight, here are some revisions, really having trouble with my handstyle..
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shit Outta Luck View Post
    You can hate on me all you want ribby, but I don't care. It ain't about beef.
    no beef here, you might as well be a vegetarian. Your posting habbits are just annoying
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    That's my sister faggot

  17. #111797

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    yangski post your hands in the hands thread don't just post it somewhere else because you didn't get as much feedback as you wanted. Also, the i doesn't fit the hand at all, maybe if you capitalized?

    here's a slight variation of something from yesterday, trying to decide if I should keep the a uppercase or lower, get back to meh but i think this flows better
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    Yangski: It looks lik Panqski, PWsomethingski. Or maybe a cursive S vs a P. Try write it clearly with a touch of style. Do a couple pages of them then when you feel like you've got something with a bit of flow post it up.

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    Actually I kinda dig the y it could just use a bit more on the bottom to make it more yish....all just thought mind you. but it's good to see that he listened to the "space it out" advice, people who don't listen are obnoxious mutherfuckers....but to the hand thread with this

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    yangski maybe post in the tags thread mate


 

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