Blackbooks

[gemer]

@ venom diggen the throw
@ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter
@ physph diggen the bow thing lol
@ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think
@ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good
@ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin

heres a couple freestyles i did today

3ds off in both of them a bit


not diggen this one at all

[eas]

EAS
crits wanted

[gemer]

loose the arrows the extensions and the a' is really weird..and the s/ not diggen the extension at the bottom at all go more simple man

[Colors]

eas i think you should go to the new to graffiti thread and learn bars and the other basics

and gemer im really feeling the first one, the CEM is nice, but i dont like the s because it is so far off, like the top of it seems to go too far to the left. but the cem is dope

[Wonky]

I know this is gucked up but I got bored of bubble simples just thought I'd do something completely new. So many structural errors，but I enjoyed drawing it anyway.

[sadgeh]

wonky there are bars everywhere and coming from everything, just do simps and check other writers on how extensions work.

[nkzs]

wonky: seems like there's a lot of stuff going on, maybe tone it down a bit and drop those extensions.

heres a few ive finished recently, little bit of variety.

[Colors]

the piece that says what i think is blue is the best. do more stuff like that because its simple, but theres some things wrong. the right leg of the u could be brought up more it looks awakward, and fix that b if your using bars those holes shouldnt be so closed and small especially the top one. the e is a good idea but that one is skaetchy, just keep doing simple junk like that. maybe add a force too

[gemer]

thanx colors

[Wonky]

@gemer, why do you call tem freestyles? I can see pencil marks? What does that mean?

[MN Nice]

They're light pen marks to get his bars right.

[Wonky]

Is that still a freestyle then?

[Tempo718]

posted this on facebook. hope buddy dont blast me again.

[dankbudz]

it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch

[Evow1]

top one is dope^

[Hick94]

ya same seder nice little 3d effect on the first one and temp the best advice i can say quality over quantity...theres no point in half assin a sketch per day, ive seen better from you...if you dont have time just do one every 2 days or whatever suits you....

[Colors]

seder that top one rapes face.
and tempo im getting like legit pissed haha keep your bars the same width! use bars! look up graffiti for beginners damn

[DEMPO]

it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch

Dank sorry I dont meet your standards bro but I will try harder and maybe one day you'll feel my shit. peace

[dankbudz]

HICK -
crits on the bottom, save the ink for when you get a realblackbook, i used to to that and i look back and I'm just like fuck, wish i had those colors now. lol

BUT connect the bars on the H and K and pay attention to bar width, like that fatty C, it should have more of and oval shape cut out of the center. and spacing between letters, you got neg. space in the H and K but crammed the IC in between, you coulda made the I more vertical so there was a bit of space to the left and if you narrowed the bars of the C it wouldn't be half bad.
hope you understand what i said, but another thing about colors is it is distracting, and if you are trying to improve your letter structure, you can't really look at it as critically if you throw on all these colors that you think are filthy or some shit

Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that

COLORS, in case you wanna peep this before 3d is on n shit. also i get more credits for post in it more... lolz imma probably do a few more NAKED cuz its an ill word

[Colors]

damn dude that looks tight! haha get all the credits you can... and i might redo yours too, possibly if i dont suck at sketching tonight. that already looks ill without that seder 3d