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    Sone I'm just wondering from the display name you aren't that kid on youtube doing shitty sona pieces on trains are you?

    Coloring and developing what I've been continually posting, I've done it enough to know what is really important at this point. I feel like after the e it drops of and looses flow. I'm hoping that by extending the e so that the first leg on the a can have as much slant as the p will do the trick, but if anyone has any advice please lemme know......and bars...need to focus on bars....

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    I think its the E ruining the flow of the rest of it. Try a regular capital E with emphasis on the vertical bar. Lose the broken bars on the S, make it bigger, an extend that bar to match what the K does. Your P is nice man, sketch a new font based on it cause its got potential.

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    No. who ever you have seen on youtube is not me.



    I AM NOT SONA. who ever the fuck that is. je suis, SONE, SENCE, SEONE.
    I do participate in Acts of Graffiti/vandalism. Not only do i condone such acts, but i encourage them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Norfsuthr View Post
    I think its the E ruining the flow of the rest of it. Try a regular capital E with emphasis on the vertical bar. Lose the broken bars on the S, make it bigger, an extend that bar to match what the K does. Your P is nice man, sketch a new font based on it cause its got potential.
    sadly this font was based on the p. but if I make the suggested corrections I think something different could come about. thanks

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  6. #111826

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    Quote Originally Posted by Colors View Post
    You should stick to capital letters, this is hot. You should use a white outline too.

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    I do participate in Acts of Graffiti/vandalism. Not only do i condone such acts, but i encourage them.

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    a page i did this morning

    Picture 226 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

  9. #111829

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    middle one is good the B needs some work maybe get rid of the jutting part on the top of the B....the top sketch lose the arrow on the b and the connection from the r to the B also on the middle part of the E you lose your bar widths a bit....the bottom i advise not trying wildstyle sketches for a while

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    some stuff i did in a friends book...I didnt put in alot of effort. just sorta did them without motivation so they lack hard.

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    no

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  12. #111832

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    The letters aren't half bad, just need better flow and less negative space.

    @Gerb - chill with the connections, your bars are wack. A clean simple looks 10x better than some out of control piece.

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    just messing around, i didnt use any pencil. only marker which is why its not that great. although i actually like the n.

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    This one is not one of my favourites, critz.

    The K on this one isn't very good.

    Thoughts?


    Thanks.

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    trying to come up with a new straight/simp to practice and maybe throw up some some places

    Picture 229 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    Picture 227 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickrurl] by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    Dank, good letters but the top of the S bothers me a little, and the right leg of the R is like eh! It curves weird imo.
    Been fucking around haha
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