Blackbooks

[dankbudz]

HICK -
crits on the bottom, save the ink for when you get a realblackbook, i used to to that and i look back and I'm just like fuck, wish i had those colors now. lol

BUT connect the bars on the H and K and pay attention to bar width, like that fatty C, it should have more of and oval shape cut out of the center. and spacing between letters, you got neg. space in the H and K but crammed the IC in between, you coulda made the I more vertical so there was a bit of space to the left and if you narrowed the bars of the C it wouldn't be half bad.
hope you understand what i said, but another thing about colors is it is distracting, and if you are trying to improve your letter structure, you can't really look at it as critically if you throw on all these colors that you think are filthy or some shit

Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that

COLORS, in case you wanna peep this before 3d is on n shit. also i get more credits for post in it more... lolz imma probably do a few more NAKED cuz its an ill word

[Colors]

damn dude that looks tight! haha get all the credits you can... and i might redo yours too, possibly if i dont suck at sketching tonight. that already looks ill without that seder 3d

[dankbudz]

lol thanks man, and foreal, i am getting some free shipping.

[Colors]

ehh i just like the n. crit this junk if you want, mostly the k because the k is wack.

[DEMPO]

Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that

Oh of course I should have expected you to say that. Thanks for your concern anywho

[gemer]

@ wonky i call them freestyles because i dont erase

[Colors]

breaking this down into 3 parts. Crits are definitely welcome.

this is my piece without the outline so you can actually see the bleeding letters


This is the finished product with the forcefield, but i feel like the forcefeild ruined the whole piece


This was my favorite stage of the piece that i should not have given a bad force. Just pretend this is the finished product not the forcefield one

[W_G_O_N_E]

i like the force i think the letters pop a little more , here is one i did for the piece battle

[Colors]

holy poop dude that ones sick. im just not a fan of the connections, not saying they are bad i just dont like connections haha. i have no crits dude, all the letters seem nice to me, good job

['Crook']

yeah you're right colors that ones sickk !!

[Wonky]

[kwu]

dope naked.. your stee is so consistent, only crit I can shoot your way is the right bar of the n meets the left one a lil weird, kinda makes it look like an m but not really cause I know its an n, maybe if you dropped that bottom line of the connection so that the bar meets horizontally. dope nonetheless homie

and that cutlas is grime too, though the thin connections are extra

some exchanges tryna expand the letter vocab, crits welcome n hit me up if you wanna exchange i'm always down

[Colors]

kwu your style is so dope man, and i feel you on my n situation haha. only thing i can really say about yours are that i know they arent what you write, but the mokas is the dopest IMO, but the N in zeno(i think) the middle bar i just dont like the way its bent, makes it look a little weird, and the z is tilted more than the other letters. thats really all i have, keep it up man.

And if you haven'talready, go vote in the Toy Piece Battle, we only need a few more voters, so go and vote!!

[nkzs]

it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch

I've been writing sede since 2009 so ill prolly continue to do so. Not saying I'm good or anything, clearly I'm still in the toy section. Just looks like if you want the name get out there and start bombing cause you've got catching up to do in that sense.

[Colors]

So long as you dont bite each other and you dont live right next to each other you're good. although i see why seder doesnt want someone writing the same thing without the last letter haha, and youve been writing since 09 and thats what you got? Dankbudz is better and probably does get up, probably more than you. and you shouldnt be getting up, because you have a long way before your stuff even looks remotely okay-ish.

[nkzs]

So long as you dont bite each other and you dont live right next to each other you're good. although i see why seder doesnt want someone writing the same thing without the last letter haha, and youve been writing since 09 and thats what you got? Dankbudz is better and probably does get up, probably more than you. and you shouldnt be getting up, because you have a long way before your stuff even looks remotely okay-ish.

Yeah its on and off but its only throws anyways. Not good enough to try pieces yet.

[SteezeFuhDayz]

figured id try a two letter. crits please.
@ W G O N E: that piece is sweeet, im feeling the colors a lot
@ kwu: your style is so dope and i agree with Colors, the mokas is the illest

[dankbudz]

myes, myes... i probably do get up

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

you fucked up your R, and the S looks a little weird. Youve come a long way though keep at it

[MN Nice]

Good looks to Colors, dank, kwu, wgone.

Lookin for some crits on this