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    Quote Originally Posted by RedEyes View Post
    Because this site is wack as fuck and ran by toys. heres my sketch for the LIME battle. GO VOTE!
    Your 3d is fucked. Those extension things on the I and M are gay. Quote marks on a piece? ok.. The arrow extension on the L works but isn't straight, the on on the E doesn't because its not round at that part like the L.

    And GOD FUCKING DAMMIT physik cut that shit out.

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    Any crits on these please ?

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    Crook - Drop that extension on the R, it covers up the O to much in the second one, and it just doesn't look so hot - Goes the same for the K.


    Vanishing point is waaayy to close to the E, made it look all awkward =/ - Didn't notice the bottom right of the W is missing 3D until I posted lol.

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    first sketch from my friend
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    crits please!
    crook- those O's need work, i would try making them the same size as everything else.

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    I get a little depressed when i get on BS and realize i dont have pics of any new stuf....
    but anyway
    skewr-just remember to try and keep all of your bar widths the same, or atlest relatively close
    crook- i think the 3rd one is the best, but the R covers the O's a lot and same with the o's covering the k. and unhook them, and try to go simpler, like the r doesnt need the extension nor does the k. and your c looks like it stands alone in the 3rd piece like its more tilted than the rest and farther apaart and alittle bigger

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    Thanks for crits !!!

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    postin this again...
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    dank- that bottom one is solid, but i wanna see you do more with your style
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    skewr, obv move the vanishing point, and maybe change up the top right slanted line on the K and i think thats a pretty nice outline

    some shit for crits


    quick simple


    not sure about the 3d on this, any ideas?


    and this is before any 3d or anything just straight outline, i did the 3d 45 degrees to bottom left and i looked alright after though
    You have to know the rules before you can break them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by canteen green View Post
    Attachment 53949 mods u can delete the pencil sketch
    wats rong with this? can i get some crits i know i colerd it wack but besides that

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    Can someone give me crits please ??

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    killroy that bottom piece is ok, but the O and N dont really fit with the rest of it
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    Krusty- do stuff like the green one and avoid things like your other 2 sketches

    Tasty- i can't do much with my style, cause i don't really got any thing good going style wise, usually turns into shit

    simp sketch, crits?
    i think all i gotta fix is the R, slant it more and maybe put a lil bit of curve in the Rs vert. leg and fix the horizontal leg cuz its kinda gay
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    just widen the bar in the middle of the E, and yea do your R thing. You should start tweaking your letters, we all know you got simples down lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    Tasty- i can't do much with my style, cause i don't really got any thing good going style wise, usually turns into shit
    just keep trying to add things, or do something different. if it turns out like shit, learn not to do that, or keep working with it until you succeed
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    dood... im tryin to tweak em man
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    Just small things, like add a seriff or bend a letter, small things will get you going


 

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