lol i got basic structure down but I'm tryna learn to add some movement too it, which is proving to be a bitch
and you're walking the right road dude... I can see definite potential and a proper future in the way you're heading., you're going at it one step at a time, mastering each one little by litte, start to add very minor bends to your letters. italic to the right, italic to the left, extended stuff, serifs... experiment with them all but don't go crazy, keep moving nice, slow and steady and you're golden boiiiii
crook. ekra, krusty, and canteen green, you all should do what dankbudz is... take him as an example of how you should progress. I'm being frank now, I'd usually fuck with y'all, but this time I'm being very serious. it's the only way you're gonna progress.
again. that blue burn piece made my day. seeing it among all the bad stuff is kinda refreshing dude. thanks.
only comment I'd give is to make the N a tad narrower to match the width of the b, u and r
Yeah props to seder for progressing like a real man
ER in the second one is dope keep those n working on GB's
thanks man, exactly what i was lookin for, i just need tips on the right direction to go
anyone wanna give me some crits on anything I've posted in here? seems like my stuffs just been getting scrolled over recently..i want to improve!
Colors - don't cover ur A so much on the throw
emace - that shit happens to me a lot, so im going to give u some crits cause i feel ur pain yes, i think it is way to busy i dont even know what it says, the kink in the middle looks weird and im still not sure what letter that is supposed to be, the bar width is off in a lot of places which im guessing was on purpose but it looks bad, and get rid of all the extensions. Keep working on simps for now.
hope this helps
been working on that piece i posted on the last page this just a sketch just trying to work on the flow any crits or advise is greatly apreciated
Checking to see if the forums image paster works.
And if it does the daze piece is where i started at and the last one is from where im at know basiclly
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Canteen- you should hit the basics for a minute
Sentinel and S33on3- look at your shit, and look at anything that has writing on it that you would pay money for and learn from it. like a cereal box, or a book title, movie cover, cd, anything professional
i get bored in class
These are kinda old. Looking for crits on them.
The R on Rad is tight dank.
syn I've seen better from you, but you say they're older so whatever. But for your newer posts you've had, keep all the bars on a letter connected, no overlapping lines. Looks bad.
naked - keep trying for a K, it'll be a good throw then.
Yeah, I'm just going back over some old simps because that's all I need to be really painting. All I can paint is simps.
Don't even try to paint your pieces. Make progression with it like with paper. tags, throws, simps, so on and so forth.
not bad at all
some of these dont seem very toy at all