@SED Thanks for the advice man.
@SED Thanks for the advice man.
Critz please????
Cred - Nice highlights
Loges - try to clean up your bomb and increase the flow. the e is nice tho.
oh yah and cred that green and purple joint is really dope
colors - those bars are dope and that forcefield is impressive
game - try to get rid of the gaps between each of your letters
seder, looking good. Nice clean letters!
cred, getting better, although I'd rather see you focus on letter structure some more instead of relying on the colours so much to make it look fresh.
Colors, pretty sick stuff as well! I think it would look good if you wouldn't colour in the empty space inbetween the letters completely. Rather apply a 3d to it.
Just a quickie because this thread hasnt moved at all today...all the markers were dying that i used.
And oh yeah DANE
And my quickie
kilroy- id cool it down on extensions n add ons and find solid structure behind those letters. then it'll look dope, the stuff you painted had mad potential but alota little things took away from it.
Naked- looking good, the asia is dope. could be improved, but anything can be improved lola
beautiful and atma, covered the A too much but ohwell
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
Serial slaughter
and nice beautiful
@Dank Good shit, how do you make your lines so clean?
@Hela I don't use color to not work on letter structure, i use color to practice using color haha.
@ dank nice clean lines on that seconed peice also r u a girl? haha
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
@ cred work on the d' man still looks like an o' to much
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
Yeah it's just tough to pull off without using extensions/bends. Running out of simple ideas.
Cred - thanks man...i dunno just take your time i suppose
Gemer - no i'm not a girl ha...what made you think that?
did this just there don't mind the coloring i was just seeing the difference between my markers
dont point your bars
you shoulda stopped that V where the blue pen lines are, Woulda looked better. And that extension on the E that goes under the V, is turrible, looked like an aight E until I figured it out
i sorta agree it didn't need that extra piece on the side but the character is sick...........
REK CREW Beirut
yeah I know fuck me right? I totally agree with everything ribcage said... but those are whatever, I was bored. wouldn't mind crits on the throw though, if any
crits anyone...... would be helpful...............
the throwie i think is sick, but i'm a toy what do know...lol
Last edited by Phat 2; 02-19-2012 at 06:01 PM.
REK CREW Beirut
@phatty the point on the V is too dramatic, throwin off the vibe of throw cause its the first letter and the bottom doesnt match. The placement of the E is in a tricky spot, specifically the middle line. Dont let the middle line of the E touch the V, it will make it look better, BUT, if you made the line go a tad bit farther, into the V, it would also look better. First couple times i looked I didnt notice te O and N being the same letter, and thats a good thing. Lastly the bulb on the right most part of the M is kinda weird, Id play with the shape and size of that part, and try to find something that doesnt throw off the balance, and doesnt look like it could be a letter, cause with the way u did the N-O, the M could easily be percieved as an M-O. ya dig?
@physh I like the shroom fill, but be cool on all those weird add ons like on the R and K, keep playing with bending bars like ya doin, and slowly add some curvy bends in there instead of it all being sharp angles, but be subtle, and dont go overboard
VVVVVVVV this too
Last edited by MASTAH_RIBCAGE; 02-19-2012 at 06:06 PM.
go simple. use even bar widths. stop adding those stupid break things.
crits anyone...... would be helpful...............
the throwie i think is sick, but i'm a toy what do know...lol
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