little e's huh... only retards do little e's
@dank yeah i know, i was trying to give it some "movement" but what ever. heres something i was working on today that has straight bars
@ EWL - looks clean, proportioned.
messing around with a pen after work
@Mild Those highlights are nice.
if using little E's is cool than consider me Miles Davis.
New markers coming tomorrow, ignore the tag i know it's shit and i'm okay with that for right now. ass.
Edit: Tried adding some depth, the silver came out weird cause my marker tip is too wide but posting anyway.
Last edited by cred1384; 03-02-2012 at 04:07 AM.
^looks good but you need to work on your letters more before messing with that side of things
Damn no one is given crits? Only thing you see here is: looks dope and that sort of stuff.
Cred - Cut the silver and do it whit that light blue it will fit together and looks doper with the darker blue.
Cred you sketch alot but you need to dumb down your stuff. Simpler and stop trying fancy coloring junk just focus on learning lettering and structure for right meow.
i see what u tried to do there cred... my advice would be to put those light blue highlights u used on the other side of ur bars, since ur 3d (which would be a shadow basically) is coming off to the left that would make more sense, and i woulda taken that silver and used it to define ur 3d... put a line of silver in the black right behind each bar, leaving the black outline there, i know its hard to put into words so heres some reference...
if u think of the light blue u used as the white highlights in this pic... look what side of the bars i put the white highlights on in relation to where the 3d is, its always on the opposite side the 3d is coming off... and what i was saying about defining the 3d with ur silver, u can see the white that defines the 3d in this pic too... just makes shit pop better when u dont cover ur outline with highlights, but instead u DEFINE it with ur highlights... hope this was helpful haha
fucking attachments... the pic is supposed to be under the first paragraph lol
Last edited by Zookyook; 03-02-2012 at 01:27 PM.
Thanks for the crits, All that extra color was just out of boredom, not trying to hide bad letter form or anything, just couldnt sleep and wanted to draw. And yea i get what you're saying Zook, Idk why i did the wrong side. Here's the pic i took of it pre-extra shit.
yea looks better without all the bs... hope u take my advice though... and instead of doin crazy backgrounds next time just do another one right on top of it... stack em up and fill ur books up children! lol
I'm not one to turn down good advice. The crits i get on here are 100% the reason i've progressed the little bit i have. The full page bg was just cause i had never done one and wanted to give it a whirl haha. Zooky those highlights are sick. Is that paint on canvas?
cool deal... thanks, just prismas and paint markers on canvas type paper...
This sorta reminds me of an armored car...
Tried some different things...I'm in love with my own NA but the K is weird.
But crits appreciated!