try thicker outlines^^
Man, I was gonna put up some shit. Then I realized how bad it would look compared to literally everything I've seen in this thread.
Screw it, I don't know you people.
Last edited by SeeM²; 03-17-2012 at 11:59 AM.
^Not that bad Seen Worse
Any Crits on mine ?
Last edited by Axil; 03-17-2012 at 01:19 PM.
@Gerb Try to keep your bars even on that one.
@Seem Dont worry about comparing your stuff to others just use that as motivation to improve. Lose the extra stuff on that one and try to make a clean simple sketch first.
@MN Nice Dope as hell, not sure about the capital I that's also a lower case i. it kinda works though.
@Anil Not bad, The A came out nice, make the I a bit thicker and flatten the point on the L so it looks like the bottom left corner of the A.
Was gonna scrap this but decided to try to clean it up a bit, oh well.
also bump for crits on my last 2, I like the third one best, second one the bars came out looking skinnier than i want. Damn noodles flappin around.
Last edited by cred1384; 03-17-2012 at 03:22 PM.
naked- ya man, for some reason the black sharpie was making hella thin lines.
cred-top ones best, curve the top of the C and make the vertical bars straight and make the D connect at the bottom of the bar.. and stop those highlights. you are starting to go backwards with those last two, you gotta keep it simple with structure.youre doing weird noodle shit, stick with what you have on the top.
@ Seem - You need to simple yours down.. Try a simple one then slowly start adding extensions etc.
@Gerb Much better man. Looks pretty good, keep it up.
Last edited by cred1384; 03-17-2012 at 05:48 PM.
Middle bar on the E came out looking out of place, Any crits?
Best thing you've done yet. Keep working with that.
OMG i changed it up for once and i actually like this. Crits?
UPloading with and without 3d cuz i sorta like without the 3d more but idk
@Naked Try getting different colored markers so the coloring will look smoother and try do the 3d from the right it looks better in my opinion other than that its not bad.
Last edited by Axil; 03-18-2012 at 12:39 PM.
use bars, go read the new to graffiti thread
and my coloring is "unsmooth" because i used the markers for bars, a freestyle so it gets darker where the bars met up.
Everyone must now call "crits" "CREDS"CREDS PLEASE!
@Azil keep your bar size relatively consistent with each letter, the A is thickk but the x is skinny.
@Naked I can't find anything i don't like about those letters, spot on negro.
@Dankbuds Your characters are cool as fuck. The teeth on that germ are so good.