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    Thanks for your opinions guys. Next time I'll be sure to keep it simple, and I'll get more practice.

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    @hicks nice :P

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    Heres a sketch for a bigger pieceName:  design 003.jpg
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    im thinking about posting that one real soon

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    and crits please
    or can i start posting on the intermediate thread?

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    dude if you want crits, rotate your photo

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    ^ What he said. Rotate your potato.

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    Your K is a little off, doesn't look right imo. Your E goes in too much (that's probably just me though) and the bottom right of your U is a little thin. And those extensions are eh, at least your letters don't suck and you didn't try to put 301241 fucking arrows. Good job overall. Not intermediate worthy though.
    And fuck both of you^ turn your heads.
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    Quote Originally Posted by upper90daynnight View Post
    and crits please
    or can i start posting on the intermediate thread?
    go way simpler. you gotta walk before you can run bud, and crawl even before that. you are no where near being able to post in that thread. no offence. you're bars are consitent though, just even out those letters, and lose the added on shit and it'll get better.
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    Definitively better than mine.

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    the perspective on your can characters is bad, letters are lack-luster, extentions need work, and need to clean up your 3d a bit (some places it's visible in the "paint cloud" others not at all it wouldn't be entirely missing anywhere if the letter is visible).

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    I am taking everyone advice on how to get better what u guys think on this?

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    Axil - Looking better, but your A is HUGE compared to the rest. Try to keep them close to the same size.

    My bar widths got fucked on this one. I still liked the outcome though.

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    I Like it apart from the E for some reason it looks like a M flipped so try making it a straight line And what do you think off my stickers

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    keep working dude

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    Thanks

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    Tried to add a bit of color to my work, is it any better ?

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    Just keep trying on your bars and spacing. simple fills are fine but just don't get too hung on colors right now. Use a lined notebook to help with your lining.

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    What has happened to this thread. Goddamn.
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    Already know this one sucks, but maybe you could get the idea i was going for, i only like the A really.
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    I realize this is the same piece as before, but i forgot i wanted to do the A and E in diferent colors so i redid it. you could crit it
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    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

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