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    Humor As for structure it looks alright but the I would made the top/middle of the R a lil bigger or something.

    Patience inside the E wtf is that??? The gap in the N looks a lil big in comparison to the rest. I personaly woulda made the C a lil bigger too. and u suck at drawing stars sory.

    Hesk I'm liking it so far but I personally would fatten the bottom of the S

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    Bark - If you didnt connect letters at top on first one it woulve been nicer, left bar on A is wider at bottom than top other than that I like.
    Gerb - Id work more on letters than with colors and effects
    Dempo - leave out bars on T and 1st E and make I bigger
    Hesk - Characters are nice looking forward to seeing it complete

    I started writing LEWD, writing WIL or WILS is a little jailbait if im going to be painting ever so chose a name with letters I like etc.


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    Can I get crits on this one too?


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    practice. practice. practice.
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    You're in a jazz group?
    Regardless of any previous posts, I do not condone nor take part in the act of vandalism. I simply document the work of others.

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    alright because the mods here are a bunch of fucking nazi's and wont let me make a thread to help you guys improve ill start posting here frequently as well as the intermediate thread i dont know about you guys but i bust atleast one sketch an day anywhere between 1-8 sketchs a day roughly so the first piece of advice im going to give you draw draw draw
    anyone want critiques/exchanges send me a pm or make a post but it has to have a picture attached if ur going to waste a post just asking me i wont respond with that being said
    heres some of my exchanges

















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    a few changes, little progression. critit.
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    the bottom of the es is weird id define it a bit more also the top part connecting the s
    also lose the arrow even out ur letters more height and width wise ur h and e are huge
    if ur trying to do a drop show its off in some places if ur tring to make the bottom leg on the h right side left corner peel id put it in tthe top of the h left corner
    Last edited by always crushin; 04-04-2012 at 05:19 PM.

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    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
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    thats fucking fresh tasty

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    Don't think i'm at a level to crit tasty or crushin.
    @Crushin that S is perfect.

    Trying to refine my shit and develop some form. The "D" letter (fuck your jokes MNnice haha) looks funky to me.
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    fark slotr, i always thought your sketches looked wild, now that you've started inking them, faark, keep it up man
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    kehn: i love your style!

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    cred cut off the those things on ur c and d and r get rid of those extra lines on tthe left hand side of your r and ur set
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    Feel free to crit slotr.

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    solid for the most part now feeling the silver in the 3d cut make the top of ur r a bit straighter bar in the middle of the h is a little wide the top left of u the make that little kick over lap the h for a bit of detail

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    Some REACH exchanges I did...they're pretty shitty though. Especially the first one.
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    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    @SOL i'm really feeling the R in that first one

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    Haha thanks dude, I've been messing around with it. It's a fun letter! And dig that^ it's so aesthetically pleasing.
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    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?


 

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