Bark - If you didnt connect letters at top on first one it woulve been nicer, left bar on A is wider at bottom than top other than that I like.
Gerb - Id work more on letters than with colors and effects
Dempo - leave out bars on T and 1st E and make I bigger
Hesk - Characters are nice looking forward to seeing it complete
I started writing LEWD, writing WIL or WILS is a little jailbait if im going to be painting ever so chose a name with letters I like etc.