haha i got so excited when i though i came up with a sick style perfect for slaps too, such a let down
haha i got so excited when i though i came up with a sick style perfect for slaps too, such a let down
@Axil: PLEASE work on your inking skills. Look at those characters of yours (or any or sticker you did, for that matter) and you tell me where to find a straight line, because I can't find any.
Don't work on stickers yet, work on your general drawing abilities before you do anything else. Go draw simple figures. Circles, squares, balls, cilinders, etc. There must be hunderds of tutorials out there on the internet which you can study and learn from. Once you've mastered this, go practice inking. Same deal: look up tutorials and practice until your hand falls off. Once you've improved those basic drawing skills, go study letters - both handstyles and throwie/wildstyle letters - because you have no clue what you're doing right now. Then go practice drawing simple letters. PRACTICE A LOT. While doing this, also practice your inking skills. Once those letters are starting to come together and you're comfortable drawing these, try to go a little more complicated. But remember to take babysteps. The exact same goes for characters: study a lot & practice even more. THEN you can start thinking about stickers.
It's not a shame to study and practice, we all do that. And it's quite fulfilling to see your improvements when you're looking back. But please don't litter your city with those crap stickers of yours.
Humor As for structure it looks alright but the I would made the top/middle of the R a lil bigger or something.
Patience inside the E wtf is that??? The gap in the N looks a lil big in comparison to the rest. I personaly woulda made the C a lil bigger too. and u suck at drawing stars sory.
Hesk I'm liking it so far but I personally would fatten the bottom of the S
Bark - If you didnt connect letters at top on first one it woulve been nicer, left bar on A is wider at bottom than top other than that I like.
Gerb - Id work more on letters than with colors and effects
Dempo - leave out bars on T and 1st E and make I bigger
Hesk - Characters are nice looking forward to seeing it complete
I started writing LEWD, writing WIL or WILS is a little jailbait if im going to be painting ever so chose a name with letters I like etc.
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Can I get crits on this one too?
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You're in a jazz group?
Regardless of any previous posts, I do not condone nor take part in the act of vandalism. I simply document the work of others.
alright because the mods here are a bunch of fucking nazi's and wont let me make a thread to help you guys improve ill start posting here frequently as well as the intermediate thread i dont know about you guys but i bust atleast one sketch an day anywhere between 1-8 sketchs a day roughly so the first piece of advice im going to give you draw draw draw
anyone want critiques/exchanges send me a pm or make a post but it has to have a picture attached if ur going to waste a post just asking me i wont respond with that being said
heres some of my exchanges
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a few changes, little progression. critit.
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SNELSKRIF KONINGS
the bottom of the es is weird id define it a bit more also the top part connecting the s
also lose the arrow even out ur letters more height and width wise ur h and e are huge
if ur trying to do a drop show its off in some places if ur tring to make the bottom leg on the h right side left corner peel id put it in tthe top of the h left corner
Last edited by always crushin; 04-04-2012 at 05:19 PM.
thats fucking fresh tasty
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Don't think i'm at a level to crit tasty or crushin.
@Crushin that S is perfect.
Trying to refine my shit and develop some form. The "D" letter (fuck your jokes MNnice haha) looks funky to me.
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Last edited by cred1384; 04-04-2012 at 06:08 PM.
kehn: i love your style!
cred cut off the those things on ur c and d and r get rid of those extra lines on tthe left hand side of your r and ur set
for hipsterpunks
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Feel free to crit slotr.
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solid for the most part now feeling the silver in the 3d cut make the top of ur r a bit straighter bar in the middle of the h is a little wide the top left of u the make that little kick over lap the h for a bit of detail
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