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    skiz: you have an advantage of sorts here. you can have symentry by just flipping your S around for a Z or vice versa. if you want a natrual looking S try drawing two circles and make the s around them keepin it the same width all the way through.

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    yeah thanks i noticed that symmetry and im likin it. haha.. i think my problem is with the k and i.. im tryin to get them to match the s and z's flow to make it look put together nicely.

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    Try capitals and keep them upright for now.

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    here is a sorta simp with an octopie on it
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    ^^no drop the character bs and focus on your letters first.

    I fuckin suck at piecing ppl name a few established writers who do nice simps, so I can pick up some different ideas,schemes (bite) lol

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    Hey guys , this is my first "piece" of 2012 and would just like some critique. I would critique others, but im not sure I'm good enough to be giving advice. I'm like, legit sorry if this picture turns out massive.

    Oh and I loooove simple stuff



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    resQ me
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    i dont feel like the Z fits good in this one but how do the other letters look?

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    thats not bad make all letters level
    the z doesnt fit because the s is round and the z is stright . im sure that theres a way to make it work like that . but as people said befor . u have the advantage because u can flip around the s .

    the s is pretty solid . 1 small thing i noticed was that were the middle bar of the s connects to the top round part its sharper than it is on the bottom bend of the s .

    ur on the right track . keep crushin pages like this .
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    word dude thanks. and yeah im workin on ways to flip that S and make a Z out of it but everytime it looks too much like a 2 to me.. idk ill try it and put one up i guess and see what you guys think.

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    I hate having my post as one of the last ones on a page

    @SKIZ: I'm not pro or anything but maybe you should work on getting the letters even, cos right now some of them are just floating above others. Again im no pro so feel free to disregard

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    yeah i have a weird habit of doing that that i got to get rid of. lol

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    Well then draw parallel lines and that reminds you to keep the letters a certain size and a somewhat straight line. It's what I done with mine, which I shall now bump as im not sure anyone will see it as its on the last page.



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    ^more advanced than me so I cant really crit what im unsure of .... besides the middle of the u looking sketchy

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    do em bigger hip3oner! or do 3 a page. bigger = better though. and yours is much better that that fools.
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    bars gradually got bigger, pay attention to that shiiit. and the base line isn't that solid. personally i wouldn't have all those extra lines through the letters. oh and there is mad negative space between the P and R, thats bound to happen though when you are doing straights,yeah, just pay attention to shit like that. I like the idea of the tops of the P and R. just work on it, do what you does
    what you had posted before was better overall in my opinion. fux with whatever though to experiment, just don't get stuck on things.

    skiz- make the bottom bar of the K go like \
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    @KOPR i like where you're headed.
    @Saltire ... if you really loved simples you'd go even simpler. way simpler.

    Dankbuds likes 'em big.

    twoo that are kinda the same kinda different. gonna add the 3d later. @Atma I didn't ignore your crits my man i just inked two sketches i'd done.




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    Lost interest in graff for quite a while and starting to get back into it, first sketch I actually put any effort into, the more I look at it the more I hate it though.
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    Magoo52 - Like T isnt too bad but work on the bars on A and F
    Resq - I think the Q would look better if the bars were all attached instead of the line just being stuck on there.
    Skiz - Make your letters in more of a line and maybe extent top bar on K a little bit.
    Saltire - More simple with less of the bumps etc, space out the U a bit more.
    Kopr - Lose the extra bars at bottom of letters.

    Can I get crits on this one?

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    CRITZ PLEASE Testing out new whiteout pen

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    Simps and 3d etc look ok to me, keep working on it, bubbles would be better with highlights all in same place on each one.


 

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