Love it, my favourite so far I think. ^
Love it, my favourite so far I think. ^
crits?
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F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
is it supposed to say tiets...
because that does not resemble and m and a b
The H is too big.
Im trying to write temb... ok let me try again damn
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cred is the good version of flatscank
people who've been active for the past year here will know what im sayin
you deserve props, cred.
Originally Posted by ven0m
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
lol^
jesus cred im impressed...
temb...id say define that M more and lose that flick off the B on the lower left part of it
two simples i did yesterday..crits?
i tried to do this like my handwriting not sure what to make of it
Cred, kwu and dank looking good.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
the letters are okay minus the m, i see what you're trying to do, but have no idea why you disconnected the M completely. it looks like an I a T and a S. when your doing the m don't block the middle off, make the whole word one block, and the top hook of your b should be brought down fully into the bottom hook, otherwise it looks like an s.
Fuck this it came out pretty bad. But if you got any crits for me go for it
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
I was told if I want crits to give them. I have enough sense to know when something looks like shit. It doesn't take an expert to notice disproportions and fucked up flow. Sorry if I'm just trying to help
Dont take it to heart. I was just telling you before someone who isn't as nice let you know.
says YOU trying something simpler
Naked - i like that simple
Hick94 - good color scheme
Dankbudz - nice drips
yo real_lyfe_dyke, you shouldn't give crits either. id actually say Zeek has more crit authority than you... its official
kilroy-id like that if it didn't have those, i think its call serifs.. the extensions and such, but thats just me. you should fatten the right of the U and bring it in more with a nice lil curve. hard to describe cuz I'm retarded. BUT also the left bar on the Y just isn't fitting in with what you got. and that bar that goes through the U should be cut
Last edited by dankbudz; 04-14-2012 at 03:07 PM.
@Killroy: Go a little simpler, the letters and extensions don't really flow naturally yet. Furthermore, don't use such hard lines while you're sketching. Let your pencil flow over the paper multiple times and find the right curves/lines that way. This looks way too forced to me. After that, you can draw a bit harder line over that right curve or line, or ink it if you want (which would be better, because you'll need to practice that anyway). Once you do that, make sure that you draw each curve or line in one fluid motion in order to prevent shaky lines and 'knots.'
Last edited by Bas; 04-14-2012 at 03:21 PM.
Well you're wrong.
that you is on the right track but the left side of the Y is wack and the U has horrid letter structure
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
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