that you is on the right track but the left side of the Y is wack and the U has horrid letter structure
that you is on the right track but the left side of the Y is wack and the U has horrid letter structure
Originally Posted by PREA672
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Fair enough, I've accepted my toy status as of late. Not trying to start beef, gotta attempt to defend myself I suppose though....
No worries Zeek.
If you're serious about anything, all you can do is listen to and learn from people that are better than you and practice practice practice.
alright so I made a few changes thanks to your crits. but that E is screwed
I would really like to try and get this name to flow too.
Last edited by DEMPO; 04-14-2012 at 04:33 PM.
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You need to get those bars on a diet plan^
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Yeah let me fuck with them some.
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i wish i applied this to everything in my life... easier said than done. real talk though.
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Mildstyle you mean like this, man I been home writing for like 3 or 4 hours 2day. YAWN
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i would say . dont connect letters like that. an try to keep the all stright an level .
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Yeash, thats actually pretty good too but what humor said for now keep that stuff level. Humor that handstyle thing at the bottom is pretty nice. but i say you H in the piece got too much jazz goin on and the R is a bit funky but good job on that one keep it up
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Stop doing the same letters. Spice it up a bit!
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how would i spell naked without these letters? Haha just kidding, I like the style but you know me i mix it up...
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Haha yeah yeah. And Hevor...that's dope.
Crit everything. I need to improve. Oh and the first one was a quick 30-min request.
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Humor is that close 2 what you had in mind? .. these letters are sort of hard to work with.
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The S in sweater is weird, and every letter is sorta based off of different sized bars, try keepin them the same. And for like A's and H's( or any letter with a bridge bar) Try to make the connecting bar the same width, it might look better. The sol's are tight bu its awkward in the colored one where the bars meet at the bottom of the S
Temb thats alreayd getting better keep working off of simps like that.
Not my usual style but i fux wit it. Exchange for naps
now that i look at it i realized i forgot the highlights on the PS. oops
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Alright thanks.
And I really dig that naked.
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