Last edited by braxtons a g; 04-24-2012 at 11:03 PM.
that 4eyes is fresh MN, i use to write 4eyes a little bit, i shit you not lol. the only thing i dont like about it is the bottom of the 4 overall i think its dope.
Shit outa luck- its looks good just the top part of the S looks funny to me for some reason. i like it though other then that one thing
-braxton- maybe go abit more simple and the R is kinda weird but just keep working at it
Axil - try fattening up ur bars and get rid of the extension on the top of the R
MN - what every one else said, the 4 looks like a Y
i like them both ewal but maybe in the first picture have the first part of ur W not so high, maybe have it drop down abit lower into the E if u get what im saying. other then that i like it, the A in the top one i like alot and the bottom one is clean and dope
@Ewal so very cleann, good shit.
@Sol digging that squared off one.
Messed up the left leg of the R and now it looks like GRED...
Last edited by cred1384; 04-25-2012 at 12:10 AM.
yeh your C is kinda messed up cred but other then that its sick as usual, the R seems a little high but maybe thats just me, i like how ur D connects at the top
cred, you're starting to go the wrong direction man. your C looks like a G, your D is still lacking. its mot awful though, just not your best. i can tell your style is gonna be dope one day if you keep progressing like this
i suck any advice?
any one know how to change the date on my camera?
i got no clue how to change the time on ur camera, im guessing somewere in the settings lol. just keep practicing, all i can say. i suck too but just gotta keep practicing man. do more simple stuff and get familiar with the simpler letters and then you will slowly progress into the more complex stuff.
Goober - looking good what camera you got I'll find out
Cred - TastyMcNasty is right "cred, you're starting to go the wrong direction man. your C looks like a G, your D is still lacking. its mot awful though, just not your best. i can tell your style is gonna be dope one day if you keep progressing like this"
Sol - i don't know why but when i look at it i read sul but i know it says sol idk can u see it ?
Lord dak - Heres some tutorials http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list...C&feature=plcp - watch them ALL and then post something on here
Last edited by Axil; 04-25-2012 at 06:32 AM.
4Eyes - Make sure the bars on Y are same width
SOL - Like 3rd piece on this page best, maybe extend bottom bar or L a little
Ewal - Looking good keep using bars
CRED - Like some of the extentions, the D kinda looks almost like a P cuz of extended bar at bottom
Goober - Use bars and keyboard letters
Can I get crits on these two, posted the 1st already but didnt get any crits.
LEWD - dont really like the first one but the 2nd one is sick!
Critz Please !
I know its shit but I started like 3 weeks ago
Cider: Go to the new to graffiti thread. All you need for now is there. Read every page.
Axil: Don't worry about color etc. Focus on your letters. Where your loop and right leg meet on your r is too big. The leg coming off the loop is too small and your o is lop sided.
I like the characters and the spraycan, keep working those simps and dont worry about it looking to simple, the more simple the better then after a while bend your letters a little or make them italic, but your going the right way about it.
I fixed the R is it any better now
I agree with peter, dont worry about colours too much just now, if you do a piece that you really like then maybe add colour but work on letters mostly, you can do 2 or 3 black and white pieces in the time it takes to do 1 colored