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    Quote Originally Posted by braxtons a g View Post
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    Hopefully im on the right track
    Crits anyone?
    CRED-such a dope style
    4EYES-Kinda reminds me of a cope2 style E, pretty clean except the 4
    RO-Its not bad, but its not that great. Its simple, yet overdone. Hard to explain, just keep drawing and drawing
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    that 4eyes is fresh MN, i use to write 4eyes a little bit, i shit you not lol. the only thing i dont like about it is the bottom of the 4 overall i think its dope.
    Shit outa luck- its looks good just the top part of the S looks funny to me for some reason. i like it though other then that one thing
    -braxton- maybe go abit more simple and the R is kinda weird but just keep working at it

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    Axil - try fattening up ur bars and get rid of the extension on the top of the R
    MN - what every one else said, the 4 looks like a Y
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    i like them both ewal but maybe in the first picture have the first part of ur W not so high, maybe have it drop down abit lower into the E if u get what im saying. other then that i like it, the A in the top one i like alot and the bottom one is clean and dope

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    @Ewal so very cleann, good shit.
    @Sol digging that squared off one.

    Messed up the left leg of the R and now it looks like GRED...
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    yeh your C is kinda messed up cred but other then that its sick as usual, the R seems a little high but maybe thats just me, i like how ur D connects at the top

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    cred, you're starting to go the wrong direction man. your C looks like a G, your D is still lacking. its mot awful though, just not your best. i can tell your style is gonna be dope one day if you keep progressing like this
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    i suck any advice?



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    any one know how to change the date on my camera?

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    i got no clue how to change the time on ur camera, im guessing somewere in the settings lol. just keep practicing, all i can say. i suck too but just gotta keep practicing man. do more simple stuff and get familiar with the simpler letters and then you will slowly progress into the more complex stuff.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze View Post
    looks better then your stuff in the past, keep practicing. maybe include the W in ur name, can do more with it but thats all up to you
    There a graffiti crew called row and i didnt want to start getting crossed and the w was pissing me off i cant do anything with it and in all of my walls my W are shit :P

    Goober - looking good what camera you got I'll find out

    Cred - TastyMcNasty is right "cred, you're starting to go the wrong direction man. your C looks like a G, your D is still lacking. its mot awful though, just not your best. i can tell your style is gonna be dope one day if you keep progressing like this"

    Sol - i don't know why but when i look at it i read sul but i know it says sol idk can u see it ?

    Lord dak - Heres some tutorials http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list...C&feature=plcp - watch them ALL and then post something on here
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    4Eyes - Make sure the bars on Y are same width
    SOL - Like 3rd piece on this page best, maybe extend bottom bar or L a little
    Ewal - Looking good keep using bars
    CRED - Like some of the extentions, the D kinda looks almost like a P cuz of extended bar at bottom
    Goober - Use bars and keyboard letters

    Can I get crits on these two, posted the 1st already but didnt get any crits.




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    LEWD - dont really like the first one but the 2nd one is sick!

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    I know its shit but I started like 3 weeks ago

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    Cider: Go to the new to graffiti thread. All you need for now is there. Read every page.

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    Cider - Heres some tutorials http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list...C&feature=plcp - watch them ALL and then post something on here

    Any critz on my 1

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    Axil: Don't worry about color etc. Focus on your letters. Where your loop and right leg meet on your r is too big. The leg coming off the loop is too small and your o is lop sided.

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    I like the characters and the spraycan, keep working those simps and dont worry about it looking to simple, the more simple the better then after a while bend your letters a little or make them italic, but your going the right way about it.

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    I fixed the R is it any better now

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    I agree with peter, dont worry about colours too much just now, if you do a piece that you really like then maybe add colour but work on letters mostly, you can do 2 or 3 black and white pieces in the time it takes to do 1 colored


 

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