holy fuck yoiu little shit, you're making me stop posting here. you are not my friend and you will not put my shit on your fucking youtube video. jesus christ.
Could I get some critz on this? There are mistakes I can see, but suggestions/comments on the flow would be nice. I know I ran off the page...
Black and whitess
too much.. gotta take a step back
your C looks like an L then a U molded into an R, you have way too many connections and extensions and lines going through your shit, it was started to look nice a few posts back, if refined, but you keep trying to improve, which aint bad but its looking like you are loosing your footing
And your C to R connection is a bit off.
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
Cred: Personally I think it's working. Only thing I'm not liking is the C and C/R connection. Maybe just move the top right of the C up a little. I'm diggin it. The D is dope. Maybe cut the extention of the back of the D and do something with the bottom of the E like the right side of the D.
i'll remove the video for all of those that are crying about it :P
@Peter thanks man, I'll try that
Fixed up the last one.
REALLY feeling that sketch man, nice steez. Only thing im not a huge fan of is the "foot" of the E if you know what i mean. Maybe just a little tweak
uknowigetup- i know what the internet is you grimey douche, if anyone shouldn't be writing it should be you...
and hell, if its was someone else... almost anyone else... making a video of actual good shit, on an actual GOOD youtube channel, id dig.. but this shit.... hellllll no.
um.... use a new paper?
In the above piece, I would work on getting the S and the E balanced out. See how the top portion of your E, is curved, and the top portion of your S is bar-d out. Work on bringing down to S a little bit. Mostly just generally try to get the S and the E the same style, and balanced. If you kept the bottom part of that E, and worked on the bottom left bar of the S, you could get those to look balanced/symmetrical. nomsaying?
can some1 crit my throwies in the throwies section "))
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