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    looks good mildstyles having an identity crisis?
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    willis-maybe lose the extension on ur L in the 1st and 3rd picture. i like your E and D in your second picture but just keep practicing. practice your smurf character, its weak right now but better then i can do and in time if you keep practicing it, it will be a dope ass character to put up in spots... if your going to paint stick to tags and throwies, dont attempt burners or a straight letter yet....maybe attempt a straight letter after some practice but just stick to mainly tags and throwies for now if ur going out painting. just keep practicing simpler stuff. your second photo is good just work on the L and W the most, E and D i like but still needs more work as do i lol.

    looking clean Hipe, make your letters bit closer to together, mainly the P and R, the space in-between in the two kinda puts it off. your R's first bar seems to go from skinny to fat but maybe thats just me, if your going to make your K's two smaller bars with that fat to skinny look, you should do it with your R as well, like the leg thing connecting your R's circular part if you get what im saying, sounds kind of confusing. your 3d looks good but maybe your O should have a bit more? keep it up

    i like your N and R BigF. i dont like the top bar on your E's though, maybe give it a bit of a dip or somthing and dont have it come back as far behind the letter. maybe make the top of the E one closed off bar or like leave a little gap and then draw the bottom part. the bottom part is nice i think, just keep practicing and get it more clean and what not...yours seems to be cleaner then mine though ahah

    Can i plz get some crits on the pictures i posted before??
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    Kaze. Straight letters. that is all.

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    thanks peter, so i should just lose all the bends and shit? should i just toss out and scratch the idea i had there or go more simple and try to build into it rather then jump some steps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by H1P30N3R View Post
    word I see that I gotta kinda step back away from the paper and get the bigger picture. I just gotta draw it 100's of times just like a throw I guess.. atleast Im on the right track appreciate you always giving me crits/pointers. I will draw it quite a few more times until I am atleast semi satisfied on paper before i try a wall. Fuckin toy forum has been flooded with kids thinking they just start out as revok or some shit.
    Yes! Always take a step back and look at your shit! When painting or drawing, it helps so much and that last part is true as well.

    Quote Originally Posted by BigFaggot View Post
    quickie, crits yo.
    I can tell you're homies with Naked, ya got similar letters. But forreal straight letters for awhile or just fix these, the bar widths are all off. The left side of the Es, the right side of the R, the bottom right of the N. Fix it.
    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Nice N bigfaggot
    Im about to flood this cuz ive been gone a little while.
    Judging by all the Fuck you pieces I guess I've been in a good mood lately huh?
    and a Gees piece for eyecandy
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    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

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    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie
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    trust me. It makes you look stuepid.

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    Rewz shut up its all joins ha
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie
    Quote Originally Posted by baabo123 View Post
    trust me. It makes you look stuepid.

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    @shit otta luck, haha yea people say that, thatnks for the crit ill put it to use
    @MildStyles haha shut meng you stole my N. and that was me on rewz, i forgot i was on his and posted.

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    You guys could just like, hang out with each other instead of talking on a forum...

    Just a thought.

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    No way hes a bigfaggot
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie
    Quote Originally Posted by baabo123 View Post
    trust me. It makes you look stuepid.

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    yea thats true, iam.
    @MN haha, yea i feel ya.

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    i meant graffiti..

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    shit you haven't progressed an inch... I say it's a sign you should probably find a new hobby
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    thanks for the helpful crit,, dick
    Quote Originally Posted by ribcage View Post
    ehem, You sir, are gay. I shit on nigglets like you for breakfast
    Quote Originally Posted by cigarette View Post
    you are ready to venture into the world
    the world of warcraft....

    i meant graffiti..

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    that was a very helpful crit he gave you imo.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BigFaggot View Post
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    Bottom right leg of the R is to thin. Fix dat mutha fuckaa
    Naked haha the first Fuck looks like Euck...and Gees is killin it.

    The first one of these is like 1-2 months old, I don't think I ever posted it.
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    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Paint that top one
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie
    Quote Originally Posted by baabo123 View Post
    trust me. It makes you look stuepid.


 

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