i'll remove the video for all of those that are crying about it :P
i'll remove the video for all of those that are crying about it :P
@Peter thanks man, I'll try that
Fixed up the last one.
REALLY feeling that sketch man, nice steez. Only thing im not a huge fan of is the "foot" of the E if you know what i mean. Maybe just a little tweak
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Originally Posted by Mildstyles
Besides the S being to far from the O and E, and the middle of the E being weird what's wrong.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
uknowigetup- i know what the internet is you grimey douche, if anyone shouldn't be writing it should be you...
and hell, if its was someone else... almost anyone else... making a video of actual good shit, on an actual GOOD youtube channel, id dig.. but this shit.... hellllll no.
um.... use a new paper?
SOL,
In the above piece, I would work on getting the S and the E balanced out. See how the top portion of your E, is curved, and the top portion of your S is bar-d out. Work on bringing down to S a little bit. Mostly just generally try to get the S and the E the same style, and balanced. If you kept the bottom part of that E, and worked on the bottom left bar of the S, you could get those to look balanced/symmetrical. nomsaying?
can some1 crit my throwies in the throwies section "))
Once again with the clever comebacks man. It must be easy to argue when you use said formula;
[Insert profanity and other vulgar terminology (it'll scare people and not make you look unintelligent at all!)] Then simply [Insert an insult your opponent just used and send it right back at them! (this is an intense scare tactic, BE CAREFUL WHEN YOU USE It, it won't make you appear illogical in the slightest.)]
Looking a lot better man. Have you experimented with dropping the E down, and removing the back extension on the D? If you could make the bottom of the e, or the lower leg symmetrical and balanced with the R it would look more amazing. Just a suggestion, it looks really good as is. Loving the flow, the back of the D/what the E sits on is the only thing that pops out as odd to me.@Peter thanks man, I'll try that
Fixed up the last one.
im glad you've formulated my plan to scare little kids on the internet. maybe you can go do it on other forums and think you are cool
also, don't double post and quote a photo in the same page, it makes YOU look unintelligent , and don't give crits cause you suck nuts.
I better have been in that video
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Haha Naked...and fuck you nine I didn't have any other paper.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
Thanks for the crits guys. Should I just try to go more simple? I also tried to make my letters look more different from each other, whadya think?
What do you guys think about these? Criticize my shit hard, it helps
3rd has most potential, fatten the K bars and make em str8 not kinked
IMG_0247 by centrysams, on Flickr
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sol - not sure bout that s man the o an e are solid
bio - try doing straights for a while before you start using bends and leans in your letters
crits please
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not bad. top right part of the k would look better without kink. then because u changed the k make the bottom right leg of r the same . also the o seems to not fit the style of the other letters . and the 3d is off on the o a lil bit . would be nice if there was a way to fill neg space between the p and r . just thoughts
but with a lil practice . all those things will fix its self. keep fillin pages,
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Nіgga please
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