"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
ohhp there he is again killinnn it
Try getting a better looking fist grabbing on the right. it looks kind of limp
want this as a name change with a passion. lil pencil outline for some crits.
dank, nice concept we're waiting 2 see it filled in
Last edited by DEMPO; 04-29-2012 at 07:56 PM.
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Dank- the picture looks cool so far, maybe with the monkeys left arm have it giving the middle finger or holding a 40 or some shit like that lol.
Dempo- the agida looks good i think, a name change could be good, do it up if you really want to. I like how the G and D come out of your I like that. and who is holding that massive bowl or chronic in it??? those nugs look to big to be real lol
Would appreciate crits on these pieces of shit, fucked up on the R.
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dank - goin ape shit homie I dig the face just touch up his arms your characters are boss!!
agida - top of the g is a little off and I really dont dig the the off set legs on the a's , but that could be just personal preference. But overall it looks alot cleaner than your recent work so keep at it.
thinking of a name change myself "nephu" didn't have room for the u but I dig the name and the letters for pieces seem to fit together well.
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thanks mayne.
id advice refraining from changing your name unless someone in your area already writes it and is up.
if your having trouble with the KOPR i was gonna suggest earlier tryng KOPER
crits on that though, id of done and uppercase N, personally. but the lil extension on the foot is a no go right now, also the top of the N gets a lil thin. not really feel in the boxy P. and If you made the middle bar of the E the same size its kill some space. try pulling your letters closer in together. , just some thoughts. keep up the work
kaser- man theres alotta kaser's out there.. think I've told you that before. good use of bars i guess, just make your S curve and Your top R curve. don't hid ethe leg of the A behind the K like that
hipeoner-3d in your P is wak, and make it closer to your E
thanks dank i appreciate the crits. il think of another name, i only used kase/kaser for throwies and straightletters cuz i like the letter combo but il think of somthing else lol. if i have the A's leg infront of the K then wont it like throw off the angle its on? or should i just make all my letters further away from eachother?
Yea thats a solid idea ill try the koper ... I was just frustrated paintin my first simp today the o is a bitch to make perfect on a wall. But then again it was my first attempt. Thanks for the crits I need to try different letters to gain experience anyway. Ive only drew about 15 -20 simps I just need to get down on my spacing next. Question do you all add your 3d as you complete each letter or after you do all letters?
kase - try out nephu lol you might like it
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naw I hit him wit da a to da k muhfukka!
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yea the alter ego wasn't as amusing as I had thought it would be.
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