Blackbooks

[Kaze]

lol hipeoner i could try it but i cant do P's...i guess i gotta learn all letters eventually, i was thinking of either going back to my old one seak, or maybe try something like Ashmuk, like that jewish word shmuk..thought it would be funny but i dono still trying to decide. i add the 3d after i draw the outline most of the time but sometimes i add in 3d after each letter too...dono if u were asking me though cuz i suck

thanks dank, il space them out more then what i got now.

[H1P30N3R]

lol muhfukka dave chappelle, gotta love that guy.

[Beko]

I just forgot to re-ink one of the 3d lines.

okay i see it now!

[Beko]

the O bothers me a lot! crits appreciated!

[cred1384]

@Beko the K looks nice, the wobble in the O looks strange you're right. the top of the E looks iffy as well, maybe try making it expand a bit like the bottom right leg of the k?

Improving my structure.

[HëRbN]

your D could be confused for an O and i dont like how short the left leg on the R is but other than that i love your style. nice work

[Kaze]

beko- like both you and cred said, the O is weird. i like your T and and K though and the bottom part of your E is nice. maybe with the middle bar of your E have it coming out a little bit in the back of the E if u know what i meen. the shading looks good too i think.

Cred- as usual it looks pretty fucking dope from my stand point lol. only thing i dont really like is the left leg on your R and that thing ontop of your D that comes out to the right looks kinda weird, sorta makes it looks like a crazy J lol. other then that though i like the D and i think your E is sick.

[Willis1989]

Cred - Like the piece but not really feeling the top of the D
Kote - Id move the K over a little, feel free to ignore me but It looks like its taking to much off the O
4Eyes - Dont like the top of the Es and S otherwise the throws are ok

I fucked up most of these, thought id post em anyway, fuck Ws I started writing Lead instead of Lewd cuz just cant do Ws and Ive been doing Ws since my first name twice as long as my other letters, I think the LEAD looks better anyway, could I get some crits on these?

[IronyATB]

@Lewd your fills need work, too messy.

Also graff culture is too homophobic, I plan to change that. Embrace the dick, become the dick.

[Willis1989]

yea not too bothered about colours atm just letters, just coloured it to fuck around

[MN Nice]

Some exchanges

[kwu]

^ dope these letters suit your style more

havent given crits in a while but i see some worth mentioning
Lewd/Lead n Kote, just avoid the extra kinks, bends and extentions, and focus on the movement of the bars, the illest simples in my opinion dont need all that extra shit if the flow is on point
Cred, I kno you're trying to develop your style, and your structure is improving quick, but keep practicing simples cause that shit will help you figure out how your letters best coincide and where you can kill negative space without throwing in the extra ish.

recents

[dankbudz]

that shit is straight fressh, atma

[H1P30N3R]

thats dope shit atma only thing I dislike is the philly get you a swisher lol

[Mildstyles]

Atma i love the 2 page ones. And that last one is so dope.
Cred thats much better but fix yo D

[Reality]

Opinions? Somewhat new to graffiti. Practiced for quite some time. Some suck, some are better.

[no-sleep]

you WILL get better just keep practicing

[DEMPO]

trying to do @ least one sketch each day. wish I had the patience to do more.

[dankbudz]

if you are trying to improve, dempo, the advice id give is to not color your work for a while. just stick with black sharpie and pencil. youll get twice as much done... which should lead to quicker improvement.

gotta start coloring my older shit, just got a new black sharpie so i can outline fuck ya...

[Kaze]

^^Reality- like no-sleep said, just keep practicing and you will see improvement. its good that your practicing lots of different letters but you should pick a name and practice that and try to master it, its still good to experiment with other shit too though, just concentrate mainly on what you write. keep it up

Dempo- your letters look cool but i dont really like the coloring in there. the shadowing looks good i think, try to push your self to draw 2-6 sketches each day or something. patience will grow

dank- i think that looks sick, the one thing i dont really like is the D but it doesnt look bad, better then what i can do. the streaks looks good and i like the concept with your E and O...the ripped neck character is dope too