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    something i shit out for the battle, nowhere near clean. also, A and E are fucked.

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    1love-fix up your A and especially the middle part of ur E, make the bars abit bigger, maybe take out the curve on top of your E, like how it comes in and curved into ur main bar or the E. i like ur R though, nice and simple.

    mnnice- i like ur 4 a lot and first e, not really digging the top part of the Y or the middle/bottum or your S, maybe dont have it come down so sharp and tight, maybe have the bottom part of the S with some more angles or someshit... overall those it looks dope though i think

    dankbudz that looks sick, i like ur k, the bar of your T looks kinda small but other then that i cant point anything out. it looks dope

    Cred- looks good, i like your R alot more this way, maybe have the bottum bar of your D that comes in come in a little lower.

    BigFaggot- that looks clean except i dont really like the black arrow type things u have in ur background, i dont really like that thing u have below ur middle bar of ur E and have the second bar of your U a little fatter so it matches the other bar of the U. maybe have your E a tiny bit smaller...looks like it drops down just a tad to low
    Last edited by Kaze; 05-03-2012 at 05:52 PM.

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    I see the gees dripping off of you
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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    the 2nd E is too covered, and the top of it is fucked. The end of the bottom of the S shouldn't continue up so far. try and make the curves you put on the bottom of the E's more smooth and give the top of the 4 a bit more space. and consider dropping the extension. also i don't really like how straight the middle of the S is

    oh ya physh, your characters are dopeee

    the bitch isn't decreasing in size, just looks like it in the pic....

    CRIT ME BRO!
    yo punk bitch! na im playin lol, is that black pen or something else cause that shit is crispier than popeye's chicken g

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    dank - thats nice as usual not much I can crit you on so listen to big krit
    cred - looks good minus the bar atop the e going toward the r... I understand your probably trying to fill void space there it just doesn't look good to me personally.
    faggot- thats nice I just dont dig the little triangle thing below the middle bar on the e.

    crits please ill add 3d vanishing point something later.Opinions on which type would fit the best appreciated also.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    cred, your letters seem to be getting weaker man
    I've been trying to improve the overall structure and did a simpler one to see how it looked.

    Here's a more complex one. R feels like it's too, and just now noticed the D looks way too much like a P..

    Last edited by cred1384; 05-03-2012 at 06:27 PM.

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    Some of my stickers kinda rushed, not to good but any crits? Name:  textfree95564586794.jpg
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    CRITS!
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    @ naked haha heavy influence muh nigguh, its burned in my brain.
    @hipe, its not just a random triangle haha, its part of the mid bar of the E that swoops in. poor execution is all.
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    getpaid- dont like the top 2 but the bottom one is nice...drip affect on the first one is cool though.

    cred that sick, bus the bottom bar of your D is too high

    hiperoner- that throwie is sick, as for the burner try to make the gap in your G smaller, dont have the top part so round maybe and have it start tighter into the G or something, if u choose to do that, with the space left over at the top maybe do a little something with the R, like have the top bar of ur R come over ontop of your main vertical bar of the R then stop and come back tothe vertical bar, sounds confusing but hopefully u get what i meen, i like your R though its clean and with your A try to fill in the open space by were the legs stop, maybe have one drop down further with a bit of a bend or something
    Last edited by Kaze; 05-03-2012 at 07:08 PM.

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    battle
    Hipe- try striaghtletters for a little and avoid bending your bars until you got the movements down and widths and all that. and try to keep all your bars the same width cuz that N is super fat with the bars
    HYP- That silver H is the best minus the stupid little serif thing at the top left, and with your Y's and P's try doing them more simple and dont let your outline go inside the letter
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    that shits way to simple to call a bite because i was doin the same shit a few years ago
    unless the letters are bend for bend then it worth callin out
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    me? i was talking about the influence on his style if you're talking to me, i can see the gees influence on his stuff a lot
    I wasnt talking about biting
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

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    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Going back through these pages brings back the memories, haha, mues this is fresh. i think you should do more this style
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    Hell yeah^
    And Naked your ANE are good except the breaks on the N seem a like they shouldn't be there and your E is a little big overall. The bar sizes on the G are what made it look weird and the bottom left of the R is too pointy. It like gets wider then pointier. I dunno that shits weird.
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    y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BigFaggot View Post
    y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.
    wow. you're username basically sums you up, doesn't it?
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    obviously yes lol
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    doritos

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
    F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)

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    are you implying to dick face's comic thing? or just doritos?
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    I tagged a bus seat yesterday.

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    kwu- was a office depot black ben. like them bics but cheaper..
    cred- those lil things just ruined it, don't waste your ink on that one
    naked, thats dope
    sear gtfo outta this thread mang!! too proper
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