Home     Graffiti Shop     Forum
Earn / Redeem Credits

Thread: Blackbooks

  1. #114441
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Location
    Chi City
    Posts
    337
    Credits
    1,290
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    so its all a big ass waste of my time n' shit ohhhh ma bad

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
    F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)

  2. #114442

    Default

    Dempo- Nothing's a waste of time... graffiti's one big learning experience. You have a lot of extensions on the bottom that don't really help the piece, and the one on the top right of the V is the same deal. Keep working on those letters to build structure, and then try adding extensions that compliment the style and flow of the piece.

    Pover- Keep your bar widths even, or at least fairly even. Although there are times and places where varying the bar width works, you're not quite there yet. Also, your 3D needs some serious help. What happened in the gap towards the bottom of the P? And at the top of the P you made a drop shadow instead... Check out the good threads on this site to get an idea of how 3D should work.

  3. #114443

    Default

    Thanks, learning a lot in here.

  4. #114444
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Location
    Chi City
    Posts
    337
    Credits
    1,290
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    Name:  718667352_2566866783_0.jpeg
Views: 82
Size:  26.9 KBName:  718667566_2566867536_0.jpeg
Views: 79
Size:  18.9 KB
    this 1 is prolly equally as bad right?

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
    F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)

  5. #114445

    Default

    No, thats much better. Just drop some of the stupid stuff like the horizontal bar at the bottom of the V, and some of the cuts(or all).
    Its not that bad
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

  6. #114446

    Default

    lookin way better Dempo, although i would drop the horizontal bar on the v as mentioned but also on the 2nd A. i understand you probly put them there to look symmetrical which os good, cuz your paying attention to balance and shit, but they dont fit. and the first A looks funny, woulda made it same as the second. over all its jery clean and R has potential.

  7. #114447
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Location
    Chi City
    Posts
    337
    Credits
    1,290
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    I got to bitch now, it's so irritating that 1 centimeter can ruin your structure. FUCK THAT

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
    F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)

  8. #114448

    Default

    thats why you gotta watch out for that centimetr bro. keep workin on it.

  9. #114449
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Location
    Chi City
    Posts
    337
    Credits
    1,290
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    alright yall, this is probobly the most challenging thing in my spare time at the moment so if I happen to get frustrated dont take it personal. thanks for keeping me in check.

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
    F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)

  10. #114450

    Default

    no problem dude.
    My nightly peice a crap. i understand the 3d is off it was just freehand, crits.Name:  Photo0091.jpg
Views: 70
Size:  105.5 KB
    mess around colab!! i was outshined...Name:  Photo0090.jpg
Views: 70
Size:  161.4 KB

  11. #114451

    Default

    Much better temp. Neer you gotta step off naked's coattail and work on your own thing. Its all good to take notes and get ideas from each other but that last page looks like it came straight outta his blackbook.

    New sketch


  12. #114452

    Default

    i dont understand why everybody thinks im "on his coattails". that pissed me off. ive been doing my N's along with everything else before i ever heard of naked. i have been writing writing twice as long as him, i know it doesnt show but i have. he's been posting here longer so suddenly everyone thinks he inspired me to start writing or something. its a generic ass style, and neither of ours of began to delvelop yet. naked does not own diamond tipped bars, or the letter N. your S and 4 are off.

  13. #114453

    Default

    Don't you guys know each other?

  14. #114454

    Default

    what does that have to do with anything?

  15. #114455

    Default

    haha funny shit
    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by aiko View Post
    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

  16. #114456

    Default

    Chill man. No need to freak the fuck out over the internet. I don't know you or Naked, but him posting his stuff on here first and then you coming along with similar work makes it SEEM like he's been around longer, also considering his sketches and painting are cleaner than yours.

  17. #114457
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    the mawww fuckin hood
    Posts
    1,555
    Credits
    671
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    yo VAGINA that shit its tight son! ;-) hahaha

    NEER i like that N in the top one fo sho...

    goin over the old with some new... paint markers w00t!


  18. #114458

    Default

    im not freaking out, i just can never post anything without some one saying that i suck nakeds dick.
    and thanks zookyook.

  19. #114459
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Location
    Skyrim, Tamriel
    Posts
    1,264
    Credits
    1,595
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    meh
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

  20. #114460
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    the mawww fuckin hood
    Posts
    1,555
    Credits
    671
    Earn / Redeem Credits

    Default

    no prob bob... yo tasty ur style reminds me a lot of seyor, some dude that used to post on here, i like the ER connection a lot...

    bottom page last post bummpin bummpin





 

Similar Threads

  1. Blackbooks For Sale
    By D Snif in forum Tools and tips
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: 03-03-2007, 06:59 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Back Top