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    d look a little off, maybe bring down the right bar a little and make the bottom bar corve a little like the E. also, the top right of M extension looks funny. pretty fresh though, its got style.
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    Wolvf- those are interesting, the bottom 2 ones r prob the nicest ones out the 4, u should try doing some simpler stuff too and see how it goes.

    dank looks cool, on the extension on the top right of your M maybe u should have made it more straight or used the same design of one of the extension on the bottom of ur M. kinda looks like u tryed using the same extensions you used at the bottom left of ur M but didnt turn out, i could be wrong though. i think the E is cool, with ur D maybe lose that dip u got on the mid bottom outside part

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    some new stuff..whatever tho
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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    take a step back hombre and work out your letters and heights and bars
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    need some crits on my O and M

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    fix your E, lose the M extension, fix the middle and round the bottom of your O

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    thanks for the crits guys
    and dank lovin that S on street

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    Those highlights on Seldom look fresh

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    Doodle at lecture


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    @Bas That 3D is Fresh

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    Kroe those look really cool, some parts look kinda off but i cant even give good crits, that stuff is beyond me, maybe try some simpler stuff too and see what comes of it.

    Tempo- The E looks too big and like dank said take out the the extension on the M, maybe make top bar of your T abit longer, it looks abit short of the right side, other then that though i like ur T and P, just keep working at em

    seldom those looks dope, in bottom picture on ur words street the drip affect coming off the S seems kinda off, the bottom part of the S top drip seems like its on a angle going up when the one above it is just going straight, i dono though u have a better eye for this stuff so maybe its suppose to be like that, the cuts in CRED is dope, cuts in C look kinda funky but i like it, really dig the R and E.

    bas i like the the shading and 3d, maybe try working with some better letters but it looks way better then wat i can do.

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    @Kaze & Dank thanks guys, i know the attempts at pieces arent up to par i wasnt sober doin em lol but ill step my game up, also that seldom & street cred ish is fire man, props on those
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    quick exchange, K and R are top heavy, but i kinda dig the J. critss.
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    yeeaa
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    Haven't posted in a while, been way too busy. Thought I'd throw up an old sketch, critz?
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    or maybe not be a bitch and pull through on the fucking battle, pussy!
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    big faggot that jerk looks sick! R could be a bit better, maybe a bit bigger or have the E a abit smaller.

    Dank that looks solid, that bottom E is dope, looks clean

    Taro those are interesting but im not really digging them, one on the right is kind of cool. maybe try more simpler stuff

    Emune to be honest i dont really like it, try drawing even bars more and make ur letters out of that.

    I really fuked up on the drop shadow but oh well, need some crits plz

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    Kaze, regarding 3D and shadows there are two basically things you can do:
    - Make all the lines go in the same direction (works for both 3D and shadows)
    - Work with a vanishing point (which is more a 3D than a shadow effect)
    It's easiest to use a ruler for both. In the first case, you just have to make sure you keep your ruler straight.

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    I want crits

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