Soam, the a looks like its slouching where the s and o look solid. The m gets a little wild. And if I may advise, that tail bit on the s hurts the piece, I'd do away with it. So in short, check your a and m bars, clean it up and keep going
Rush, you need work all around, can't really tell what I'm trying to ell with though, a throw or a solid piece. The s ends bad at the bottom either way. The back leg of the r is too small, I kinda like what you did with the u but the first h looks like a n and the second looks like another r
self Crits, bottom L bar is fat, p is a bit wild compared to the rest, if I missed anything let me know!
Last edited by DaFugg; 05-18-2012 at 11:47 AM.
Your n looks like an r then ha
yeh it looks more like Rush than Rasn. The A looks a lot like a U
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dafugg - the P is too small all round, id make the horizontal bar of the L lie flat and have the P lean back into it a bit, and make the bottom curves of the H bars the same as the top, dont get too big,
RASN - personally it looks like a throwie style thats trying too hard, learn your bars man
@drugs, those be throwies son, if you want better advice with those put them in the throwies section.
@soam, those characters are bomb! Calm that M down a bit, it looks too slouchy and blobish in my opinion.
@HLP, fatten that P up a bit more, I would lose the curves on the bottom of the H and structure the ends of your bars a bit more.
@Taro, sick effects man, I would chill with those extensions though. You've got hella drawing steez, that's for sure.
I fucked up my 3d pretty badly, its too much on the back of the letters and not enough on the bottoms, other than that critz? I also slanted more to the left as my sketch went on, my E's are way off. Additionally, I could use some advice regarding the U.
Last edited by uknowigetup; 05-18-2012 at 04:35 PM.
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Kroe and Someonewashere, both of your guys drawings look sick
6i9o- start with keyboard letters man
thezarosone- that looks cool, maybe try taking a step back and going more simple then after awhile you will naturally go back to more wild stuff and have ur skills down..the bars all look pretty proportioned though so good job
kehmone- those drawings are really cool, as for the graff start simpler man..the drawing isnt terrible, the M and A prob need the most work. just start simpler man, we all have too
illegal drugs those look like throwies, use simple bar structures for drawing burner type stuff
taro. that R and A is bad i think but the T is alright, you have cool affects but your letters lack, keep practicing man, go simpler
Emune that looks better then the post before, maybe take out that extension on the U, it would look better just normal...looks good though keep practicing.
Dafugg- that looks dope, maybe have the bottom part of your P similar to the bottom part of you H so it matches more and just make ur P bigger
Last edited by Kaze; 05-18-2012 at 06:42 PM.
Emune-I would say chop the upper extension on the U and make shur all your bars are the same size, and u already kno the 3D. Other than that, try a fill.
Kaze-Aww im sad, I liked the A in that one lol I agree on the R though. Thanks for the Crits
Finished!! dont know how i feel about the collors, not enough contrast in the center colors, not crazy about the 3D fill either. but overall pretty happy. crits. wow, cant see the outline in the pic at all. its is pen but you can see it in person.