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    dafugg - the P is too small all round, id make the horizontal bar of the L lie flat and have the P lean back into it a bit, and make the bottom curves of the H bars the same as the top, dont get too big,
    RASN - personally it looks like a throwie style thats trying too hard, learn your bars man
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheZarosOne View Post
    no one gave me feedback
    Makes sense since you gave no one feedback either.

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    @drugs, those be throwies son, if you want better advice with those put them in the throwies section.
    @soam, those characters are bomb! Calm that M down a bit, it looks too slouchy and blobish in my opinion.
    @HLP, fatten that P up a bit more, I would lose the curves on the bottom of the H and structure the ends of your bars a bit more.
    @Taro, sick effects man, I would chill with those extensions though. You've got hella drawing steez, that's for sure.
    I fucked up my 3d pretty badly, its too much on the back of the letters and not enough on the bottoms, other than that critz? I also slanted more to the left as my sketch went on, my E's are way off. Additionally, I could use some advice regarding the U.
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    still gettin up i see

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    u know he is

    lolololol
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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
    u know he is

    lolololol
    Ahahahaha oh wow...

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    Kroe and Someonewashere, both of your guys drawings look sick

    6i9o- start with keyboard letters man

    thezarosone- that looks cool, maybe try taking a step back and going more simple then after awhile you will naturally go back to more wild stuff and have ur skills down..the bars all look pretty proportioned though so good job

    kehmone- those drawings are really cool, as for the graff start simpler man..the drawing isnt terrible, the M and A prob need the most work. just start simpler man, we all have too

    illegal drugs those look like throwies, use simple bar structures for drawing burner type stuff

    taro. that R and A is bad i think but the T is alright, you have cool affects but your letters lack, keep practicing man, go simpler

    Emune that looks better then the post before, maybe take out that extension on the U, it would look better just normal...looks good though keep practicing.

    Dafugg- that looks dope, maybe have the bottom part of your P similar to the bottom part of you H so it matches more and just make ur P bigger
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    emune- you got time to do that piece of shit and no punk bitch? you must really be better then me at painting and sketching...
    this page sucks
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    Emune-I would say chop the upper extension on the U and make shur all your bars are the same size, and u already kno the 3D. Other than that, try a fill.
    Kaze-Aww im sad, I liked the A in that one lol I agree on the R though. Thanks for the Crits

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    damn girl, you thug
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    enough making fun of you, you need to go to the new to graffiti thread, and go from there
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    Finished!! dont know how i feel about the collors, not enough contrast in the center colors, not crazy about the 3D fill either. but overall pretty happy. crits. wow, cant see the outline in the pic at all. its is pen but you can see it in person.
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    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

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    ^yeah color schemes not a hit but its dope. You could thicken the middle bar of the N a bit, maybe cut the R's leg at the knee if you know what i mean and just make that bar longer.

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    thanks man
    Quote Originally Posted by dmgraff View Post
    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

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    @Neer, I'm not digging the odd extension on the upper left of the N, it doesn't seem to match any other part of the piece, just my opinion though. Looks tight!
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    Trying to grasp more complicated pieces

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