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    All the letters seem to flow from left to right except for the M. It seems to be slanted to the left more
    And the non-graff things are sick man

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    Soam, the a looks like its slouching where the s and o look solid. The m gets a little wild. And if I may advise, that tail bit on the s hurts the piece, I'd do away with it. So in short, check your a and m bars, clean it up and keep going
    Rush, you need work all around, can't really tell what I'm trying to ell with though, a throw or a solid piece. The s ends bad at the bottom either way. The back leg of the r is too small, I kinda like what you did with the u but the first h looks like a n and the second looks like another r
    self Crits, bottom L bar is fat, p is a bit wild compared to the rest, if I missed anything let me know!
    Last edited by DaFugg; 05-18-2012 at 10:47 AM.

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    I write rasn lol

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    Your n looks like an r then ha

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    yeh it looks more like Rush than Rasn. The A looks a lot like a U

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    dafugg - the P is too small all round, id make the horizontal bar of the L lie flat and have the P lean back into it a bit, and make the bottom curves of the H bars the same as the top, dont get too big,
    RASN - personally it looks like a throwie style thats trying too hard, learn your bars man
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheZarosOne View Post
    no one gave me feedback
    Makes sense since you gave no one feedback either.

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    @drugs, those be throwies son, if you want better advice with those put them in the throwies section.
    @soam, those characters are bomb! Calm that M down a bit, it looks too slouchy and blobish in my opinion.
    @HLP, fatten that P up a bit more, I would lose the curves on the bottom of the H and structure the ends of your bars a bit more.
    @Taro, sick effects man, I would chill with those extensions though. You've got hella drawing steez, that's for sure.
    I fucked up my 3d pretty badly, its too much on the back of the letters and not enough on the bottoms, other than that critz? I also slanted more to the left as my sketch went on, my E's are way off. Additionally, I could use some advice regarding the U.
    Last edited by uknowigetup; 05-18-2012 at 03:35 PM.
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    still gettin up i see

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    u know he is

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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
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    Ahahahaha oh wow...

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    Kroe and Someonewashere, both of your guys drawings look sick

    6i9o- start with keyboard letters man

    thezarosone- that looks cool, maybe try taking a step back and going more simple then after awhile you will naturally go back to more wild stuff and have ur skills down..the bars all look pretty proportioned though so good job

    kehmone- those drawings are really cool, as for the graff start simpler man..the drawing isnt terrible, the M and A prob need the most work. just start simpler man, we all have too

    illegal drugs those look like throwies, use simple bar structures for drawing burner type stuff

    taro. that R and A is bad i think but the T is alright, you have cool affects but your letters lack, keep practicing man, go simpler

    Emune that looks better then the post before, maybe take out that extension on the U, it would look better just normal...looks good though keep practicing.

    Dafugg- that looks dope, maybe have the bottom part of your P similar to the bottom part of you H so it matches more and just make ur P bigger
    Last edited by Kaze; 05-18-2012 at 05:42 PM.

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    emune- you got time to do that piece of shit and no punk bitch? you must really be better then me at painting and sketching...
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    Emune-I would say chop the upper extension on the U and make shur all your bars are the same size, and u already kno the 3D. Other than that, try a fill.
    Kaze-Aww im sad, I liked the A in that one lol I agree on the R though. Thanks for the Crits

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    damn girl, you thug
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    enough making fun of you, you need to go to the new to graffiti thread, and go from there
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