Blackbooks

[dankbudz]

yeeaa

[Taro_AAK]

[uknowigetup]

Haven't posted in a while, been way too busy. Thought I'd throw up an old sketch, critz?

[dankbudz]

or maybe not be a bitch and pull through on the fucking battle, pussy!

[Kaze]

big faggot that jerk looks sick! R could be a bit better, maybe a bit bigger or have the E a abit smaller.

Dank that looks solid, that bottom E is dope, looks clean

Taro those are interesting but im not really digging them, one on the right is kind of cool. maybe try more simpler stuff

Emune to be honest i dont really like it, try drawing even bars more and make ur letters out of that.

I really fuked up on the drop shadow but oh well, need some crits plz

[Bas]

Kaze, regarding 3D and shadows there are two basically things you can do:
- Make all the lines go in the same direction (works for both 3D and shadows)
- Work with a vanishing point (which is more a 3D than a shadow effect)
It's easiest to use a ruler for both. In the first case, you just have to make sure you keep your ruler straight.

[Kitten]

I want crits

[Kaze]

thanks Bas, appreciate the advice. i have to work on 3d and drop shadows alot

[Bas]

You're welcome. 3D and shadow are actually rather simple as long as you work accurately.

[GpersKreepers]

Taro - i'd loose the 'stems' on the purple sketch, thicken those other thin bars and it would be a nice style,
Emune - like the name, the N is your strongest letter, the second straight bar on the M goes from a little too small to too big, same as the E's, and make thee U curve it would look sweet,
Dviser - not sure why you made the VI so small, an id make the ER over lap a little, like the SE,
kitten - write kitten instead of neks, its less played out, good your keeping simple, try and get your bars the same width, the S is far too skinny,
BIG F and DANK BIZZLE lovin it, really like the first hipe

[TheZarosOne]

Critique please

[Rasm]

At least you recognized this yourself, but Kaze, you screwed up the drop shadow on almost all of your letters. It shouldn't be on both the top and bottom sides of the letter; pick one way to go with it and stay consistent!

[Taro_AAK]

Thanks Gpers and Kaze. Ill work on it, and post more.

[BigFaggot]

@ kaze thanks man, looks a lot better than your other stuff, but connect all your bars and let letters over lap each other instead of those dotted lines, the S and E look pretty nice. D needs work and like mentioned, vi is too small.
@ taro, i actually like the one on the right, the left one needs work, keep doin yo thang. nice style.
@ neks. go a little simpler and keep all your bars the same width, the s is super skinny.
thanks Gpers haha

[pover]

Thoughts on name/graff?

[burn222]

[uknowigetup]

Thanks for the crits with my previous post, I went a bit simpler. I actually liked where this was going until it lost flow after the U. Should I keep progressing with this style?

[pover]

That's much better dude, keep at it.

[TastyMcNasty]

lol. burn

[Kaze]

thanks bass, yeh i have to just be patient and keep working with it, for the last couple days i havnt had the patience to sit down and try to draw something out

Kitten-Keyboard Letters, use em for now

thanks Gpers i appreciate the feedback. yeh haha i dont know why i made the V and I so small, alright il push that R in abit and il prob just take out the attachment things on the top

thanks rasm for the feedback, appreciate it. yeh i really fuked up on the drop shadow, when i was doing it, it didnt look right but just kept going lol, just happy i got a picture before i added it

dope thanks big faggot, appreciate the advice. alright il just make then overlap and take out those extra lines, by connect all bars do you meen the top of the D and R were it just sits on an angle? or is there something else that i dont see? I was trying to do something more of like what Kroe said but i cant really pull it off lol. i appreciate the tips thanks man

pover it looks like u need to make ur bars more even and stuff, the idea you draw out looks cool, but just kind of sloppy :/ maybe go more simple man and just keep at it, it looks like once u get the bar structure shit down u will progress fast cuz u already know what to draw after.

BURN-use Keyboard letters for now

emune i like it better then the other one, maybe fatten up the bars abit and try getting it all more clean and even, just keep at it. lose the extension on ur M and maybe the ones at the top of your E and work on the bottom ones of the E