Blackbooks

[EWL24]

kaze - both look good but the 3d looks kinda weird in some parts. like in the D's and under the K
crits please

[Pitlord]

I did this for a contest. I says Molotow. Full color sketch, A4

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Here is the video of how I made it. Hope you like it.

pitlord looks cool but its not all the most legible

What does that mean? Im not a native :P

Edit: Pitlord, nice video man. That canvas came out super clean.

Thanks. It's A4-Paper. Not even on canvas :P



Any other crits?

[Kaze]

thanks for the crits, yeh i dont know what to do with 3d in the D and maybe with the bottom of the K i should have had it start skinny and go fatter to the end of the bar...i just gotta get better at 3d

i like yours its clean and simple with style. i like that E you did, maybe with your A you should have had it abit higher and have the legs abit longer..but i dono it looks good the way it is right now too i think. top left part of your V the 3d looks kinda off

^ haaha i meen some parts of it are not so easy to read

[MN Nice]

I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching.

Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters.

Watch your bar widths no-sleep

Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits

Bump for more crits.

[Kushbombing]

I like the beveled look to those letters. That's something you don't see too much. I don't like the 3d and how the vanishing point is in the center.

[DEMPO]

4eyes that dude is killer with his green hoodie, yo the letters fill is missing something maybe a blending color to add so its not such a sharp contrast from light to dark

[BigFaggot]

just messin around, gunna try to paint something like this soon.

[sadgeh]

4Eyes - fuck man i love Doc Doom looks nice and MF is mofucking dope too. On the letters looks nice but the fill must blend from dark to light.
Neer - dope simp looks good

[BigFaggot]

thanks man, but nah guys a blending on those would take away from the beveled effect. that 4 eyes is lookin nice, the green around looks good, but maybe pull the Y out a tad bit,the top left is kinda covered. Doc Doom loks good though.

[G_CAL]

Getting my blackbook next weekend ;D

[Shit Outta Luck]

I like your style Gpers.


And I'm back. So many stars.

[BigFaggot]

HAA!! when i saw this i was listening to Stars, ad the chorus just repeats "so many stars". freaked me out a lil.
looks nice though, you got simples down.

[dankbudz]

big fag, paint that with them same colors. looks cool. but without that red

do i really just et ignored on the fact that the doctor doom look likes a robot eskimo lady?!!?!?

[centrysam]

IMG_0271 by centrysams, on Flickr

[BigFaggot]

thanks dank
and humor, get that shit outta here, intermediate thread. that looks fresh.

[Shit Outta Luck]

Dank you're spot on. And faggy...that's incredible.

[Askoner]

[MN Nice]

big fag, paint that with them same colors. looks cool. but without that red

do i really just et ignored on the fact that the doctor doom look likes a robot eskimo lady?!!?!?

Hate on. Just trying to get better

[Wizard]

iight

[dankbudz]

i like to whizz
mn- i aint hating, i just think it looks super similar. you're improving man!!! <3 <3 <3
no hate just love
no homo