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    Quote Originally Posted by Wizard View Post
    bump! cus i got no crits haha
    daaaaaaayyuummm

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    @ cro2k both are pretty good i like the ears the best though just keep working with your bars man
    @ mcnuggets try going more simple man
    @ willis keep it up man just keep working on your bar widths
    @ wiz keep working on your bars man, i would leave the drips and stuff alone for now

    I havent really posted anything in a while, I'm just working on my bars and structure before i starts with fills and 3d crits are welcome.
    P.S. i know my marker skills are lacking lolz




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    Lol take your own advice homie work on em barrs.
    And I'd just throw on some drop shadow.
    What makes you a real writer?
    Never doin' the same style twice.

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    @Willis, watch your bar widths man... and don't extend the horizontal bar of the A so far into the two vertical bars.
    @Mcnuggets, go way simpler. You have almost zero letter structure in there. Also learn how to spell practicing.
    @Cro2k, I definitely see potential in your work. Keep putting in time. Your 3D is a little off in a few places though.
    @Kaze, your 3D is fucked on that one man... at the very bottom of the letters it goes almost horizontally out to the left, but in some spots, like the far right part of the S, it goes almost vertically upwards. The 3D should come off at the same angle everywhere, and should also be the same width, which it isn't in your piece.
    @BigAfrica, you also gotta keep your bars the same width man.
    Last edited by Rasm; 06-15-2012 at 09:41 PM.

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    Yo Kaze good shit with the fill and shadow still could use some work but nice.
    And that Ears is lookin pretty dope too, thicken up that E though. Keep progressin'
    Last edited by HeyThere(O.o); 06-15-2012 at 10:44 AM.
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    ^ thanks man, yeh it came out better then i thought it was gonna but still could be alot better

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    crits please
    Last edited by BigFaggot; 06-15-2012 at 04:00 PM.
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    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

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    Got damn you've been going hard on those pieces. Good shit, mad improvement.

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    under construction :P

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    and something new

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    Quote Originally Posted by HeyThere(O.o) View Post
    Lol take your own advice homie work on em barrs.
    And I'd just throw on some drop shadow.
    I second that
    daaaaaaayyuummm

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    In the words of Kool A.D,
    Shut up, hush up
    Please, shut the fuck up
    Shut up, dude, shut up

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    BigFag & Jiska. you cats should move up to the intermediate thread.

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    thanks man, but i think ill chill in here for a while, till i get a style down and some shit under control. jiska definitely though, thats stuffs nice.
    been playin around with some geometric stuff.
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    Last edited by BigFaggot; 06-16-2012 at 01:13 PM.
    Quote Originally Posted by dmgraff View Post
    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

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    Jiskas your definitely intermidiate material
    Big Faggot loving that sketch your not far from inetermediate in my opinion
    any crits on this sketch i did

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    Letters kinda get smaller and the N isn't working for me

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    crits please

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    leave charecters out of your schetches for a while....focus more on your letters more aswell notice how the bars are all different widths same with height.Your best off just to do keyboard letters for a while to get better structure

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    yeh do what hick says and just practice keyboard letters for little whille, look at how off sized all those letters are, especialy the I, gotta work on that man i know its hard though, i have a hard tme with it my self

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    5min sketch critz please
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