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    nice sketch kroe
    Mcnuggets its not bad the colouring and shading is nice but remember less is more...you should focus more on letters

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    kroe thats sick i really dig that R, the A is dope too. you should add color to that

    looking good dane but the E in the bottom one doesnt really fit with the wrest, lose the two notch thing on the top left of your N, just have one and it will look better and maybe change up the A abit. simplify it a tad... keep practicing dude

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    its funny cos initially i had the A and R really straight and simple and the bars were kinda too skinny then i did all the other letters out and went back and redid the A and R, maybe i should do all my pieces backwards hahahaha
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    @Gophe: that looks pretty rad. digging the R,O, and E. you got the curved bar shit down pat. handies on the bottom are all hype.
    @McNuggets: sorry, kid. I gotta call you out on trying to bite my style. but, you're toy, so whatever.
    @Tasty: lol, i think he's trying to do what i'm doing :P

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    word, glad you like it dude, always down to exchange
    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
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    kroe-that would look better with half as many extensions, and that E gets weird up top ya kno?
    dane- just keep practicing, learn the letter structure n all that. but don't get ahead of yer self

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    Kroe, that shit came out nice. I feel like the A doesn't quite match the style of the other letters; it's more straight with fewer curves. And I agree that the top of the E did get a little weird, but overall its solid. Keep at it.

    Dank, that's clean with popping colors as always. I'd like to see you let loose and go wild on a sketch and see how it turns out. Also that pothead char is dope.

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    thanks for all the crits everyone, I might just redo this, fix that E and the A, clean it up, make it pretty.........maybe
    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
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    my first in awhile..
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    Idk what to do for the background or 3d
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    looks good, something seems to be wrong with the top part of the E though...i dono it could just be me but maybe if you make the top part of the E not go as far back as it does...may help may not.. other then that i like it...as for background i have no clue haha draw some grimey ass shit to match those slime bubbles..would look dope, for 3d maybe some classic streaks would look good
    Last edited by Kaze; 06-22-2012 at 12:36 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    @Gophe: that looks pretty rad. digging the R,O, and E. you got the curved bar shit down pat. handies on the bottom are all hype.
    @McNuggets: sorry, kid. I gotta call you out on trying to bite my style. but, you're toy, so whatever.
    @Tasty: lol, i think he's trying to do what i'm doing :P
    Fo real dude ?
    Does this look anything like your




    I dont admitt that i took the faces idea from you but ur not the first dude so watch what ya sayingfag

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    what about these two:
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    no need for hostility, i'm just saying. looks like an attempt to bite some shit i posted recently. beyond that, you neglected (i suppose purposefully) to include these two pictures which are much more similar to the style you tried to represent.

    why do you feel you have to come at me with insults? I called you out on some shit. you could just say "hey, no, i can see the similarity, but i'm doin my own thing. you got an inflated ego, arose. seriously, ain't that some shit"
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    Look my letters and look at yours dude
    Icant even see what it says
    Now tell me where the bite is or its whole a bite

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    not letters, overall style. it's cool though, toys gotta learn somehow. i think i bit some cats at first too, years ago. i was only saying, toys need to ween away from the tit though, eventually. i noticed what looks like a sear bite in those dots and lines too. it's obvious you're a biter. that's all.

    try to bite from cats who ain't in the forum, you know?

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    Welli actually did but i didnt bite from you so..

    And i say it again hes not the first dude

    And i actually meant it to be like electronic thing
    So w/e

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    aeros: you clearly take inspiration from Rime, Augor, and the guy that did the Oliver Heart album cover.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Somie256 View Post
    haha well put.

    @sick, werms is pretty wack. Look down, those keyboard letters look nice dont they? :P
    Werms a beast, wait and see what his lack of structure developes into...

    fuck ya

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    You gotta have style to develope anything and from what I'm seeing out of you and Werm.. You got a few years left with the black book..
    No diss or hate, take it the way you want, or don't post..
    What makes you a real writer?
    Never doin' the same style twice.

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