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    It's a little better but still hurting. Why is there shadow above the upper right leg of the K? And the shadow on the bottom right leg should go below the K. You need to be more consistent to achieve a realistic shadow effect.

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    im not good at these either but i think the bottom right part of the N's shadow should be slanted like it is in the actual N (like this kinda __/ ) also there should be a little small part on the bottom of the a for the little part stickin out of it. A good way to get a good drop shadow is just to basically resketch veryyyyyy lightly in pencil... and btw i dont know if im right with this stuff but thats what i saw that looked off.

    Also, i just noticed that when you were doing the insides of the letters (like on the a and e) you tryed to put a drop shadow in there but you should stay consistent with the distance of your drop too. like your N's is way farther away to fit a little tiny spot on the inside of the e
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    fuck, thought i should put it there cuz its on the left side but it does look bad, should i do it below u think or no?

    Thanks akaskizz i appreciate the feedback, il fix those things u said

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    yeah put it below

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    k dope thanks, im having trouble wioth the bottom of the A now haha

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    The drop shadow should be the same shape and size as the letter, just offset. Just draw the bottom of the A again, but offset it down and to the left.

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    thanks man, i think i got it abit better now...hopefully haha. il upload it soon here

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    you are very welcome sir

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    yup
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    thats sick dank, dope ass character too

    the drop shadow on this is still fuked up and messy, not all the lines r straight and shit but didnt notice till after i already went over it with a marker :/ anyways heres a naked simp since he did one for me
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    here's 3 of my most recent pieces, please give me advice and shit. i've been drawing for years but just recently got into graff
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    Keep drawing is the best thing to do.. If your into graffiti dont try and make it look graffiti, or itll look gay. Learn the letters. Solid letters structure over gay ones with arrows anyday. Walk around your city and peep the real graff and youll learn more than on te interweb.

    Kaze the thing on the A is weird and the left of the E, Ks a lil off. Looks good though.
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    thanks dank, yeh i realized i really fuked up with the thing on the E, i thought the one on the A looked abit better but they do both look retarted, thanks for the crits dude

    thatguyjacob takes danks advice

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    Kaze i really dig that K, sooo nice

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    thanks kitten, appreciate it dude

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    any crits?
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    Sick - colours are nice work on the letters
    Blunt - Go simpler, way simpler - use keyboard letters or now.
    Meas - Like the style, maybe make letters straighter and same width/height for now.

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    Dank
    I really like how clean your shit looks

    few new sketches for ya

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