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    Appreciate the crits guys
    @Willis, what krumpet said. Maybe the bottom leg of the E too

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    I did this a few months ago and is the most recent thing i have done...i didnt post any new work yet(i`m very lazy)!The quality of the picture isnt that great...the scanner eats the colors but i tried to change the contrast a bit.I used watercolors,crayons and pen.Any crits will be appreciated.

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    dat ass >.>
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    ok so basically after PARA i ran out of room... so yeh. Let me know if this isn't simple enough .__.
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    Quote Originally Posted by 6i9o View Post
    dat ass >.>
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    ok so basically after PARA i ran out of room... so yeh. Let me know if this isn't simple enough .__.
    You must have one funky keyboard.

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    ^ha

    @kroe - true say what man said, couple tweaks and a few more sketches in that style will look dope mate, dig that charo too
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    and Kroe and Gpers, i dunno if you saw this already
    http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...5&d=1340901218
    but yeh, i'll go back to that shit as i'm way off track i guess
    Ok here's your keyboard letters with bars and what not
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    yo 6i9o. dont have ur letters so close to eachother, bottom picture is best ouf of the 3 but is still very off, make ur lines more straight and have ur letters syncronized better if u get wat i meen...and work on ur handstyle too, go more simple, lose that long thing on ur R, keep practicing dude

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    So much fucking better, that shit was so whack how didn't you see? Keep rockin those for a while.
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    Crits yo
    JUST BOMB IT.

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    nice zik, the K in Kore seems abit off though, it seems top heavy sorta if u get waht i meen, maybe try reducing the top right bar of ur K in size abit, i dig those serbia tags lol, kore ones r looking good too man. i think the bottom extension thing of the S in dvise kinda throws it off, the right bar of your V seems abit off, could be straightened up abit but its not biggy, the S making the middle line of the E is cool but the bottom part of the E is off, it seems to be too fat and should have the same bend as the line parrallel to it...looking good man keep it up

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    @kroe: your stuff is gettin' significantly better by the post. keep it up, digging the chars, too.
    @main: your letters are pretty banging. chars need a little work, and the piece is dwarfed by the background and char. makes the piece look subordinate to the other elements. also, your letters look afraid of eachother, maybe try intertwining, or overlapping some of the extensions and limbs a little more... just my opinion. hope it helps.

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    some more old toy shit
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    arose one: love the green charac. sooo fresh.

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    I shouldn't have done thosed stupid lines on the words. lol but ignore that and look at the letters? Can i have some good critique? I really wanna build up my style. (:

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    keep the letters the same size, and theres no need to connect all of your letters to one another. Also, the top of the S' could use some work, as well as the C overall. E's are solid though. And finally, next time you do a piece try adding some simple 3D rather than the thick outline. Not bad overall, keep it simple
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    thebombgirl take tasty's advice, pretty much sums it all up. i think ur last picture that u posted looked better. keep practicing


    sorry for posting so many at once, havnt really posted many pics lately though. crits would be very appreciated
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    6i9o - Space your letters out, make them all the same width and height like T H I S , thats the starting point, once you have bars widths and lengths right then you can go from there. Theres no point in trying to do funky shit just now because its just gonna look toy if you aint got letters.
    Zik - Kore is ok, work on the K tho.
    Bombgirl - Nothing wrong with adding those lines just dont do too many, your letters are pretty good keep it up.
    Kaze - The Fuck You is dope, like pretty much all of these keep it up.

    Pls ignore the E on this first piece, fucked it while doing outline. Crits on other letters and 2nd piece pls.




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    thanks willis, i appreciate it dude.
    i like your second C but i think the top part of your first C doesnt really work. i like the A and D but try to bave the A abit smaller in width. i think ur first E turned out alright, maybe could have been a little bit closer in to your D to kill some negative space. you should add a drop shadow or some 3d and some color. keep at it man

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    what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    @kroe: your stuff is gettin' significantly better by the post. keep it up, digging the chars, too.
    @main: your letters are pretty banging. chars need a little work, and the piece is dwarfed by the background and char. makes the piece look subordinate to the other elements. also, your letters look afraid of eachother, maybe try intertwining, or overlapping some of the extensions and limbs a little more... just my opinion. hope it helps.
    tnx alot man!

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    Quote Originally Posted by thebombgirl View Post
    what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..
    Just keep playing with it, make sure to use bars, just do a few Cs till you find one you like best, personally I dont think your C is too bad but just keep working on it.


 

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