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    yo 6i9o. dont have ur letters so close to eachother, bottom picture is best ouf of the 3 but is still very off, make ur lines more straight and have ur letters syncronized better if u get wat i meen...and work on ur handstyle too, go more simple, lose that long thing on ur R, keep practicing dude

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    So much fucking better, that shit was so whack how didn't you see? Keep rockin those for a while.
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    Crits yo
    JUST BOMB IT.

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    nice zik, the K in Kore seems abit off though, it seems top heavy sorta if u get waht i meen, maybe try reducing the top right bar of ur K in size abit, i dig those serbia tags lol, kore ones r looking good too man. i think the bottom extension thing of the S in dvise kinda throws it off, the right bar of your V seems abit off, could be straightened up abit but its not biggy, the S making the middle line of the E is cool but the bottom part of the E is off, it seems to be too fat and should have the same bend as the line parrallel to it...looking good man keep it up

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    @kroe: your stuff is gettin' significantly better by the post. keep it up, digging the chars, too.
    @main: your letters are pretty banging. chars need a little work, and the piece is dwarfed by the background and char. makes the piece look subordinate to the other elements. also, your letters look afraid of eachother, maybe try intertwining, or overlapping some of the extensions and limbs a little more... just my opinion. hope it helps.

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    some more old toy shit
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    arose one: love the green charac. sooo fresh.

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    I shouldn't have done thosed stupid lines on the words. lol but ignore that and look at the letters? Can i have some good critique? I really wanna build up my style. (:

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    keep the letters the same size, and theres no need to connect all of your letters to one another. Also, the top of the S' could use some work, as well as the C overall. E's are solid though. And finally, next time you do a piece try adding some simple 3D rather than the thick outline. Not bad overall, keep it simple
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    thebombgirl take tasty's advice, pretty much sums it all up. i think ur last picture that u posted looked better. keep practicing


    sorry for posting so many at once, havnt really posted many pics lately though. crits would be very appreciated
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    6i9o - Space your letters out, make them all the same width and height like T H I S , thats the starting point, once you have bars widths and lengths right then you can go from there. Theres no point in trying to do funky shit just now because its just gonna look toy if you aint got letters.
    Zik - Kore is ok, work on the K tho.
    Bombgirl - Nothing wrong with adding those lines just dont do too many, your letters are pretty good keep it up.
    Kaze - The Fuck You is dope, like pretty much all of these keep it up.

    Pls ignore the E on this first piece, fucked it while doing outline. Crits on other letters and 2nd piece pls.




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    thanks willis, i appreciate it dude.
    i like your second C but i think the top part of your first C doesnt really work. i like the A and D but try to bave the A abit smaller in width. i think ur first E turned out alright, maybe could have been a little bit closer in to your D to kill some negative space. you should add a drop shadow or some 3d and some color. keep at it man

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    what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    @kroe: your stuff is gettin' significantly better by the post. keep it up, digging the chars, too.
    @main: your letters are pretty banging. chars need a little work, and the piece is dwarfed by the background and char. makes the piece look subordinate to the other elements. also, your letters look afraid of eachother, maybe try intertwining, or overlapping some of the extensions and limbs a little more... just my opinion. hope it helps.
    tnx alot man!

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    Quote Originally Posted by thebombgirl View Post
    what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..
    Just keep playing with it, make sure to use bars, just do a few Cs till you find one you like best, personally I dont think your C is too bad but just keep working on it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZIK_ONER View Post
    So much fucking better, that shit was so whack how didn't you see? Keep rockin those for a while.
    Crits yo
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    This is really old when I was still writing Bipo. I tried using a vanishing point.. but i dont think it worked too well
    Let me know if this works or what not
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    You should take a look at the new to graffiti thread. Newbies on here need to realise its gonna be years before your shit even begins to look like the wildstyle shit you see on the experienced page. This shits about having good letters not how crazy it looks, look at shit from Ichabod for example, great writer but mostly simple letters, this is the kinda thing you should be working on just now and put all the funky shit out your head.

    I know im not good but since deciding to just work on my letters real hard I find I feel much more proud of my work and effort when I see myself developing than I did when I did a full colour piece with real shit letters.

    Its all laid out for us toys on the new to graff thread so read it and read it again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Willis1989 View Post
    You should take a look at the new to graffiti thread. Newbies on here need to realise its gonna be years before your shit even begins to look like the wildstyle shit you see on the experienced page. This shits about having good letters not how crazy it looks, look at shit from Ichabod for example, great writer but mostly simple letters, this is the kinda thing you should be working on just now and put all the funky shit out your head.

    I know im not good but since deciding to just work on my letters real hard I find I feel much more proud of my work and effort when I see myself developing than I did when I did a full colour piece with real shit letters.

    Its all laid out for us toys on the new to graff thread so read it and read it again.
    I've already read it front to back almost twice now. But I get what you're saying. Simple shit with bars for now

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    Its a pain in the ass but in a while youll see your letters developing and youll feel much better about your work than you have about any other stuff. Youll be able to see the problems in your own work and won't need crits as much and thus youll develop a lot quicker.

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    For the character battle.


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    that shits pretty fresh bro
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