Blackbooks

[thebombgirl]

what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..

[Main Kampf]

@kroe: your stuff is gettin' significantly better by the post. keep it up, digging the chars, too.
@main: your letters are pretty banging. chars need a little work, and the piece is dwarfed by the background and char. makes the piece look subordinate to the other elements. also, your letters look afraid of eachother, maybe try intertwining, or overlapping some of the extensions and limbs a little more... just my opinion. hope it helps.

tnx alot man!

[Willis1989]

what should i do with the top iof the s? i think the extension on the top is a little crappy. and the c, ii have no idea what to do with it..

Just keep playing with it, make sure to use bars, just do a few Cs till you find one you like best, personally I dont think your C is too bad but just keep working on it.

[6i9o]

So much fucking better, that shit was so whack how didn't you see? Keep rockin those for a while.
Crits yo

cause i'm a toy >.>
<.<


This is really old when I was still writing Bipo. I tried using a vanishing point.. but i dont think it worked too well
Let me know if this works or what not

[Willis1989]

You should take a look at the new to graffiti thread. Newbies on here need to realise its gonna be years before your shit even begins to look like the wildstyle shit you see on the experienced page. This shits about having good letters not how crazy it looks, look at shit from Ichabod for example, great writer but mostly simple letters, this is the kinda thing you should be working on just now and put all the funky shit out your head.

I know im not good but since deciding to just work on my letters real hard I find I feel much more proud of my work and effort when I see myself developing than I did when I did a full colour piece with real shit letters.

Its all laid out for us toys on the new to graff thread so read it and read it again.

[6i9o]

You should take a look at the new to graffiti thread. Newbies on here need to realise its gonna be years before your shit even begins to look like the wildstyle shit you see on the experienced page. This shits about having good letters not how crazy it looks, look at shit from Ichabod for example, great writer but mostly simple letters, this is the kinda thing you should be working on just now and put all the funky shit out your head.

I know im not good but since deciding to just work on my letters real hard I find I feel much more proud of my work and effort when I see myself developing than I did when I did a full colour piece with real shit letters.

Its all laid out for us toys on the new to graff thread so read it and read it again.

I've already read it front to back almost twice now. But I get what you're saying. Simple shit with bars for now

[Willis1989]

Its a pain in the ass but in a while youll see your letters developing and youll feel much better about your work than you have about any other stuff. Youll be able to see the problems in your own work and won't need crits as much and thus youll develop a lot quicker.

[Bas]

For the character battle.

[omiz]

that shits pretty fresh bro

[PETER]

look up the user CRED. look at his progression. perfect example of what using that thread and crits will get you with dedication. He progressed fast as fuck.

[Kaze]

Bas that page is looking dope dude, keep it up

Bumping these for crits

sorry for posting so many at once, havnt really posted many pics lately though. crits would be very appreciated
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[emace1]

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[MASE P_2s]

1st dead letter
snags by CantTouchSociety, on Flickr

[SicK-]

Dont like how this turned out.

Lemme know what i should do with this

[Kesar]

Pretty positive I need to slow my roll.

[MN Nice]

I think it's dope. Make your K lean in more towards the center and make your S flatten out on the bottom more. You've got a nice style coming from there.

Ps that'd be a nice train hit since its Pretty horizontal

[Kesar]

I'm trying to stay more horizontal. I think the loop on the R doesn't really look correct. Something seems wrong about it.

Thanks for the Crits.

[Bas]

Thanks guys.

[KroeGHK]

[6i9o]

That O on the top one is hot. Looks kinda like a donut


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