I like the second one
straighten your letters, and make them more even.
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exchange for Antik. flash killed it a bit but it's 5 am and the light in my front room is all to shit.
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Lol Pacman's kinda chunky and sloppy but yeah
Kiddy and TBS your shit is dope, keep it up
6i90 much better dude, keep doing simples like that
yo SCAR nice man much better, the main vertical bar of your D is too skinny though, some of the bars are still a little unconsistent but i see progress, keep it up man! dope pac man character too btw, keep drawing that guy and put it on a wall
@Kaze Thanks man lol the Pacman guy is so funny looking, I'll definitly keep working on my bars. I tried to make the vertical bar on the D thicker then it was at first lol you can see the pencil line inside it where it used to be but I see what your saying about it still being too skinny, anyways thanks for the crits!
oh yeh i see that line, just after u draw each letter, look at your letters already on the paper and make sure that your bars and everything are the same as your other letters, take ur time with it dont rush it, np dude keep it up
6i90 - make ur letters not touch at all for now, space them out equally, and make enery letter the same size, you obviously spend a decent amount of time drawing, but if you dont listen to people on here and what they say you wont get much better. I see improvement form your first posts but still lacking. Make your letters S P A C E D out, pick a work, type it on your screen and draw what you see.
Dies - probs same crits for you, same size and width
TBS - not bad not really feeling the A tho.
Shade - not bad, keep at it, make bars on D a little thicker. But thats probs the best simp on the page as a starting point
I havent had much time this week to draw, but ive got these three shitters for crits if anyone has any
first atempt at a character
coloured in some old stuff
Sketch battle entry. I don't have any markers at the moment, so I had to pencil the shades, which the scanner hardly picked up.