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[omiz]

ditto /\

[Kaze]

thanks willis i appreciate it man! i dont work or anything right now so i got too much time on my hands lol

with yours the D looks a little small compared to the other letters and maybe the top part of the C shouldnt have quite as much of a bend, keep at it dude!

TBS thanks man and thats sick! really sick details in there

looks dope and grimey as always Gpers

6i90, good job going alot simpler but try to keep all ur letters either uppercase or lower case for now to make it match more

[GpersKreepers]

crit time!!!
SOL - i rate the name, the middle two are dope except the curl on the G,
ewal - dig that too, but the L needs a phatter lower bar imo
kaze - nice, you should invest in some markers!
halo - listen to kaze
cade - nice too, D aint as wide as the rest, & maybe curve the top of the E like on the C
broke - shits dope!!
TNB - the blocky style might be ok if you lost the arrows & thin bars,
kushbombing - you know my shits dope haha

[Kaze]

SOL i dig that picture u uploaded, looks sick dude. i like ur work

thanks Gpers! i appreciate it dude, what kind of marker do you suggest? i got lots of pens for tagging and some smaller paint pens but i dont think the smaller paint pens would work well for coloring, iv only used them for outlines and stuff..the markers i got to color in are like fine liner type things but colored.

[KroeGHK]

some new shiiiiiit

exchange with gasr

[no-sleep]

damn that gasr got flava especially the R

[<J-one>]

@Kroe- Fuck yea! you got one of my fav styles and no-sleep is right, that R is killer
Thanks!

[KroeGHK]

damn, thanks yo that means a lot haha your style is sick as fuck that Gophe you did is beastly lol glad you liked mine thanks again both of you

[Kaze]

shit kroe that gasr is fuking sick...dig that R and G alot

[Shit Outta Luck]

crit time!!!
SOL - i rate the name, the middle two are dope except the curl on the G

Word and you rate or hate the name? Because I'm not really down with it lol. I can't settle on a name :/ but I feel you on that G. I needa draw more. Nice sketch last page btw, down to exchange homie?

EDIT: Oh and kroe, interesting sketch.

[smack1one]

Mehh

What's with the arrow coming out of the s??

[smack1one]

What's with the arrow coming out of the s??

also fix your 3d

[malto]

[Willis1989]

Dies - use bars and forget arrows and shit
TNB - Not bad, lose all the curls and it will be nicer
Kroe - Both are dope dont really have any crits I can give
Malto - Nice piece, dont really like the middle of the M tho
Kaze - thanks for crit, I wish I had enough time to just zone out and draw. I only get an hour or two at night after my kid goes to bed and at that time I usually just wanna smoke a spliff and watch tv lol, I think I should just try and do half a piece each night because I fuck most my pieces up because im trying to rush through it

E is way too small on this one

[omiz]

really feeling that gasr piece up there.

here's a piece i did today. the fill is meh,
but it's alright. first time i've actually done a full page.
crits?

[smack1one]

http://i1191.photobucket.com/albums/...e/92597176.jpg


somthing quick i did... no sleep in a few days so yeah it's not the best, crits welcome

[Halo161]

i deff gotta get a pencil today, been usin a pen all the time , cant fucking erase mistakes

[Kaze]

@ willis, yeh i can see how it would be hard to find the time to do somthing you enjoy when you got a job and kids to look after, i usualy just would take a chop or 2 and watch tv or listen to music and then draw for abit, but if i cant get anything down id just do tags and throws or do somthing else..giving blazing a break though lol..gotta get my shit in order lol
for the picture u posted, try to have the D wider along with the E as u said before. also maybe try to give the bottom part of your E abit more of a bend up and shorten your C abit so it doesnt go that far into your A, keep at it man

Malto, looks cool, i like the E but with the R maybe have your right leg come out further or go on abiut more of a outward angle or somthing

omiz, cool picture but maybe u went a little overboard, go simpler and shit

[Derezz]

[Halo161]

i deff gotta get a pencil today, been usin a pen all the time , cant fucking erase mistakes

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