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    attempt at a different style.
    plif is a friend of mine
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    Idea for my dads memorial piece in my shop. to bad I couldn't put it on te wall like this...

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    that fill is way too busy anyway, im not 100% sure but the letters seem to look decent, keep at it, as they are the letters appear to go well together, idk tho
    omiz scrap that top sketch, its just not workin, that bottom one however, has some potential, keep workin at it
    fumer i dig your style but for some reason im not a huge fan of your F's, they arent bad or anything idk maybe its just me
    anywhoo
    not sure if i ever posted this, if i did it didnt get crits
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    some other shit
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    anyone wanna exchange?
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    I can see what you're trying to do with the liney fills but it's just coming off as unfinished

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    just a quick 2:30am pen freestyle

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    lookin' good toops. Only beef I have with it is the bottom of the left leg of the A.
    Gophe: That bottom one is sick. try that with a lower case H based off the O only inverted.

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    the only supplies i have is a dying pen, so i just played around with it, ill probably do another simpler one, when i get a pencil. i learned how to do that character by some dude on youtube a long time ago, decided id use it :]
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    i dont think i get what you mean?
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    a lower case H, but use the thickness of the bottom of the O at the top of where the curved part of the H meets the Leg.

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    For my bro Sol, that is the first character i ever made thats decent
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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    lookin' good toops. Only beef I have with it is the bottom of the left leg of the A.
    Gophe: That bottom one is sick. try that with a lower case H based off the O only inverted.
    yeah its a hard one

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    C&C only
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    halo - ur O looks like an I

    nevada - go simpler, its eligible and looks really bad

    crits please
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    EWL, i dont think that E works but the A and L is good i think, i think the W would be better if the left bottom bar just met the left vertical bar directly at the bottom rather then abit above it, it looks good though dude

    i agree with EWL bout halo's O and about nevada going simpler, halo take it back a step aswell, ur on track with bars but ur rushing it i think

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    crits plz, i havnt gotten new coloring markers yet so its still the same shitty coloring
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    Last edited by Kaze; 07-27-2012 at 03:45 AM.

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    letter structure is fucked up and its in pen but i haven't posted in a while so here's a quick sketch.Name:  image.jpg
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    kaze - looks good but the S and E look kinda weird, the center of he S is a little to skinny so try making it fatter /or the same width as the rest and i think the top of the E would look better if it was an oval like the D rather then a circle.

    semper - u have been trying all this wild style stuff for a while and it looks terrible, u really need to get some basic letter structure down before u can even attempt that.

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    thanks EWL, i was trying to makethe round part of the E more like the round part of the D but if i came to low it would hit the bottom part of the E :/ any suggestions to get around that? and i think i see wat ur saying about the S.

    and i agree with EWL about semprs

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    just a little simp and a throwie. ran out of room for the p. ignore the fill

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    didnt know what to do for a background, so this the best i could come up with hahaha
    crits please
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