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    I like your style malto, the dips at the corners are cool. I think your "U's" are a bit too cramped in there though

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    shit that naked is sick..dig that A and E alot

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    i need some help with the drop shadow..mainly on the D...wasnt sure if it should be like this or were the drop shadow goes all the way around the round part of the D and connects to the main vertical bar of it..i think its suppose to go around the round part and connect to the main vertical bar but i wanted to make sure before i fine lined this shit...could use some crits on the letters too even though there already fine lined....just noticed i missed the dropshadow on the E
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    Quote Originally Posted by Theartofverb View Post
    I like your style malto, the dips at the corners are cool. I think your "U's" are a bit too cramped in there though
    took your advice and spread the U out a bit more i think it looks better, also happy with my M now


    naked, thats a fresh simp maybe change the middle bar of your E so its the same size instead of like triangle-ish
    and dvise i like that simp too but the lower case D throws it off in my opinion

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    thanks malto, i think i made the D too small, i just did a lower case D cuz i cant make capital D's work with the round style with out making it look really retarted, i dont want it to have that big gap in the middle that capital D's got. those fumers look dope as usual, cant really give any usefull crits besides the same stuff about the M

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    Show me what I'm apparently biting.
    nvm ace, im retarded... go about your ways
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    Not finished
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    attempt at a different style.
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    Idea for my dads memorial piece in my shop. to bad I couldn't put it on te wall like this...

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    that fill is way too busy anyway, im not 100% sure but the letters seem to look decent, keep at it, as they are the letters appear to go well together, idk tho
    omiz scrap that top sketch, its just not workin, that bottom one however, has some potential, keep workin at it
    fumer i dig your style but for some reason im not a huge fan of your F's, they arent bad or anything idk maybe its just me
    anywhoo
    not sure if i ever posted this, if i did it didnt get crits
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    some other shit
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    anyone wanna exchange?
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    I can see what you're trying to do with the liney fills but it's just coming off as unfinished

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    just a quick 2:30am pen freestyle

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    lookin' good toops. Only beef I have with it is the bottom of the left leg of the A.
    Gophe: That bottom one is sick. try that with a lower case H based off the O only inverted.

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    the only supplies i have is a dying pen, so i just played around with it, ill probably do another simpler one, when i get a pencil. i learned how to do that character by some dude on youtube a long time ago, decided id use it :]
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    i dont think i get what you mean?
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    a lower case H, but use the thickness of the bottom of the O at the top of where the curved part of the H meets the Leg.

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    For my bro Sol, that is the first character i ever made thats decent
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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    lookin' good toops. Only beef I have with it is the bottom of the left leg of the A.
    Gophe: That bottom one is sick. try that with a lower case H based off the O only inverted.
    yeah its a hard one

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    halo - ur O looks like an I

    nevada - go simpler, its eligible and looks really bad

    crits please
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    EWL, i dont think that E works but the A and L is good i think, i think the W would be better if the left bottom bar just met the left vertical bar directly at the bottom rather then abit above it, it looks good though dude

    i agree with EWL bout halo's O and about nevada going simpler, halo take it back a step aswell, ur on track with bars but ur rushing it i think


 

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