il try moving that line to the left to create some more space
keaze that looks dope
obvious mental insanity zone
one must insure zen
i like the P in plif, the M in omiz looks off though, the different sized legs looks weird like thath
that mute lookin decent but that outline is a bummer tho but oh shwell
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can i plz get some crits on this, i tryed doing wat mild said and made the left part of the D smaller
Last edited by Kaze; 07-29-2012 at 05:27 AM.
Gotta work on your shadow.its all over the place and. Diff sizes..
kaze - the shadow is going the opposite direction on part of the S and u missed a spot on the back of the E, but i like it and it does look better with that part of the D smaller
lostyoursense - the extension on the A is unnecessary and i think it would look a lot better without it
dream - needs more arrows
@ ewl24.yea that was jus some quick shit for my girl
2 new boys before i get ready for my battle with Mildstyles, the w in the first kinda throws shit off because i fucked up the width
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Thanks EWL, i see what u meen with the S and E but am still a little conufsed with the S, is it the middle top part of the S drop shadow that should be there or the middle bottom, i just put the middle top part there cuz i had the dropshadow on the R going up in that area too, but i think it could be wrong cuz i dont have it like that on the E
ur both using basic bars which is good but i think ur both still trying to rush into it, step back and look at ur stuff through the perspective of someone else..or try to atleast lol simple it down abit and halo, in the top swine the ur top bars on the W, N and I shouldnt be crooked like that and the top of the E shouldnt have that bend for the sake of having a bend. just keep at it you 2 and try rocking some dope straight letters...there alot harder then they look and when done proper..look cool aswell...gotta walk before u can run, gotta poop in a diaper before u can shit on a toilet lol
Kaze - this is what i meant, since the light is coming from the top left corner shouldn't the shadow be more like this
ooooh, so i should have it come over that part of the S then stop just before the left edge, wb the middle part of the E, should i have had it on the top middle part and not the bottom middle part… (… is suppose to be a question mark..my keyboard is retarted and does those instead sometimes) thanks for the help dude i appreciate it