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Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Originally Posted by PETER
whats do you write? loll jk. ya imma do you a freestyle.
Exchange anyone ?
Swine One N.S.E
"Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard "
Me^
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Exchange with durkbudz. Cool stuff nurked.
who'd you jock that O from? ...i could guess where u got most of the rest...
Thanks for the crit guys, been doing simps for a while really just want to make that next step, about to finish out my first black book and i want this second one to start shining. Feel like the hardest part about it is making the connections make sense and not wasting space but also not taking up unnecessary space. That new to graffiti thread is pure gold i just need to take another look at it. Prolly start hanging out in the "throw up the name above you thread" or the toy battle threads seems like a good way to learn how to flow letters you arnt familiar with.
Show me what I'm apparently biting.
dope MN but i think u missed abit of 3D on the right part of the L
looks good MN, maybe the bottom bar of your E could have been abit fatter though, the highlights look dope
dank id be down to do another exchange if ur down, Halo i can try to do one for u but if u write halo i dont like that word to draw out lol il give it a shot though
heres some more shit, a quik pen doodle and a sloppy simp, any crits would be appreciated
Hahaha, Ribcage accusing of biting with no proof as always. Glad to see that hasn't changed.
devise- ya ill do ya one.
on that right picture, lose the dot thing face on the I. The S's bars are all fucked up, look at the V, then the S. the extension on the R is a no go for now. And the round parts on the D and R try and do less kinks. it'll look better. also make the VISE as big as the D R.
that V is solid, E is close. S is farthest off. your improving tho, keep it up.
still makin little changes to my M, lackin inspiration to switch it up a bit
kaze maybe try bringing your letters closer together
All he pretty much does is call bites half of which are retarded claims.
Oh and thanks mn I dig the seldo
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
thanks dank, i wasnt sure bout the extension on the R but just decided to go for it and see wat happened lol il stay away from those for a little while. i get what ur saying with the S but i dont fully understand what u meen by kinks in the round part of the D and R, do you meen like dont have it with those sharp corner type things inside the R and the bottom right corner inside the D? i always forget to make the middle letters the same size as the 2 last letters haha..bad habit lol. il work on those things u said..thanks dude
Malto that looks dope, maybe just go on flickr or som other website and look around at some stuff with M's and get some basic ideas on how to change it up abit, i really like that E in the top one, nice drip affect too
letter spacing can be an issue for me lol, gotta work on that too
Last edited by Kaze; 07-25-2012 at 10:18 PM.
one corner don't matter. but 4 random looking one one the R or the top weird small kink on the D. you could probably make it work. if your having trouble with heights, draw a base line and a line for the top
oh i get wat ur saying now, just unneccsary corners and shit. il work on that and keep that in mind, thanks for the advice
Cool, watchu write ?, i write Swine.
Swine One N.S.E
"Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard "
your stuff reminds me of a guy in SA has half ur word in hisstill makin little changes to my M, lackin inspiration to switch it up a bit
kaze maybe try bringing your letters closer together
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