Kaze - this is what i meant, since the light is coming from the top left corner shouldn't the shadow be more like this
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Kaze - this is what i meant, since the light is coming from the top left corner shouldn't the shadow be more like this
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ooooh, so i should have it come over that part of the S then stop just before the left edge, wb the middle part of the E, should i have had it on the top middle part and not the bottom middle partÉ (É is suppose to be a question mark..my keyboard is retarted and does those instead sometimes) thanks for the help dude i appreciate it
Exchange for Gasr, was trying something new. shoulda worked on the R more... a lot more.
also, get yourself to the Round Robin Tourney, need 2 more people to enter.
Last edited by TBS; 07-29-2012 at 09:52 PM.
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i found that amusing too lol
Scroll up top, kaze said wht needed to be said. If you want more, use simple bars and invest in a colour wheel to try and understand what colours go together. Also those cracks are pretty awful. 3d is almost there, couple of small mistakes though.
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Any feedback please, cheers
Blackmath take notes is my old CS:S name if you got any idea what that is. funny seeing someone writer it. seriosuly you have gotten much better.. but the 3d on your E is off.
kitten dont need to bump shit thats on the same page.. the whole is the S doesnt flow well with the rest, and i dont like your fill, or colors. i think you should probly bring the E down a bit or make it bigger.
zebo try making your ZE touching at the bottom like the rest of your letter do.
swine work on making your 3d/shadow consistant. and the I in your second one is weird i dont like it really.. keep sketching you seem to be on track
TBS that gasr looks dope. i didnt notice anything wrong with the R until you mentioned it.
Toop the second one is much better IMO
Thanks all, I thought Kaze's post was for Svine, sorry...
toop- somethin about the n seems weird to me. i think it's because the o and a both have negative space but the n doesnt if you know what im sayin
take- looks a lot like the dude fake on here
^ that K is sick but i dont like how it connects to the A... and your N is far from nice lol,
the handstyle on the bottom is pretty dope too
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