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    ^^Try to outline your letters in one movement, dont stop halfway through a bar or curve. It'll come out cleaner. Try to make all your bars the same width, notice how the bottom of the Z is much fatter than all of the other bars, just make it a bit skinnier and it'd be normal. Same goes for the middle bar in your 2nd E. Also, your E's sort of stand alone, maybe make the 2nd E a bit further fromt he first. And make more space between the Q and U. Keep on sketching
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    queez! i've seen this picture too many fucking times. those thumbs are the wrong way round.. lose the character altogether. your lines are sketchy, bars are all different widths, make both e's the same and that z is all to fuck. stop posting this one and take the fucking hint to try it again taking into consideration what everyone has said!
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    Calm down man, he's probably just looking for more crits. Don't post a pic too many times though queez.
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

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    I know. Its just the same pic over and over. Queez, take the advice, give it another try and i'll crit it properly
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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    ay, Gatsoi, you wanna do an exchange with character?
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    fuck ya

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    I'm with TBS, but i won't give crits
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    I got yours sketched out, are you looking for anykind of character in specific?
    fuck ya

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    @dank that first S is so clean.. where do you start when you write your S's? mine always come out looking weird cause i don't know where to put my pen down first.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gatsoi View Post
    I got yours sketched out, are you looking for anykind of character in specific?
    watch write? and nothing specific. mine will most likely be random as fuck.

    salix- thanks, i usually start at the bottom, but that doesn't mean you should. i simply do because i have done it that way since i started so it comes out more natural. there is no right or wrong way. just keep sketching

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    TBS n IBU, there is yer shit. i was gonna do you a throw, ibu, but i decided to not even try. I hate Y's
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    dank, its nice to see you're starting to add some style, keep up the good work

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    Thanks. That semp is ok. Just keep working on simps like that and dont do what WIZ or alot of others do. Work on those handstyles though, just make it your hand writing for now but real crisp and clean. Then add steeze
    That city is dope as fuck
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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    I'm with TBS, but i won't give crits
    yo seldo mind if I bogard your top S?

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    Dank those are all sick, i dig the herpy and broke one alot
    Semper that city drawing is sick, keep at em simps

    some unfinnished simps plus a unfinished exchange, crits would be cool

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    you got them down^^, just watch the S's and E's on the top left ones. the curves n shit. mess with flow, italicized is good way to start. add small bends/ curves where it would compliment the flow you're going for. start fuckin around. but not like WIZ does, he's gay.

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    crits please ... i was bored at work....
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    i thought you were a 15 year old prodigy chef, why u have time to draw?
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    foreals ^^
    make me some food, bitch
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    any tips on how to do 3D properly?Name:  image (16).jpeg
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    semper i struggle with 3d aswell, maybe try doing some drop shadows, still fuk around with 3d though, with the letters, u got a round S but the rest of the letters are more sharp and not all ur bars are consistent in size, i struggle with that too alot, just keep practicing and try to keep ur letters more or less the same style

    i gotta redue the top part of the R and make it bigger, noticed how retardly small it was after i took the picture and looked at it, anyone got any other crits?
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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    foreals ^^
    make me some food, bitch
    ...hope you like skirrel food
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