Walls

[pedlowskater5]

more coming up

[Cause816]

any crits?

[RUDE_Bwoy]

work on the structure and size.especially the u and e

[revid!]

dont write cause.
japer shits lookin ill man keep at it

[Takeout]

This is one of my first real throw ups and characters. Any crits?





I know i'm not good so don't bother bashing. Anyone got any tips?

[MUSEone]

I could see where tha throw could have potential.

keep practicin.

[Cause816]

Thanks RUDE Bwoy. I'll work on it. I got some caps coming in so after that i'll go out and actually take my time on one.

[rave905]

@cause get into shading b4 u try details n try n have sum sort of style 2 it

@noir yeah i can the throwie has potential but what is that charcter supposed 2 b i cant decide if its wack as shit or just plain wierd lol

@japer dope


@mickey im likin that 2 letter n i think i might even bite that y? oh! thing in the ss 2letter lol

[Takeout]

lol, thanks Rave. I'm not sure what the characters are supposed to be either. I just really like the WTF factor when people see it.

[rave905]

lol idk u should try n make it look like a clown or sumthin

[undergroundanimal]

akel,over,mcfinnigan,japer and trashtalk look dope..

rave: im not really feelin your`s its to blocky and looks very simple, your cancontrol looks allright tho.., i would stick to paper for a while..

noir: your throwup looks pretty good for a 1st one but i would change the hole inside your o and change the top of your i a bit so it flows better with the rest.. sorry but i dont really like the characters


cause: work onn your letterstructure and try to make your letters the same size and hight, some shadow would look better to...

new throwups ive been practicing:












crits..?

[rave905]

nice desire i cant really tell u nething lol
the only thing i can think would b 2 work on sum nice shading


what u guyz think of that
n i already know the dots r gay
n i forgot the shadow

[SEZ]

afer- i love the AF's
desire looking dope as always

["Riot"]

never forget.

[Teez-EmM!!!]

wasted u got the can control down but do simpler shit
cause dont write that some one does with mad respect
john skeatch more that j looks wak
rave when u do a force field keep the hand moving loose the dots and fill it in a bit more
jesice looking ill man make a throw up
mimicymcfinigan looking dopeeeeee


the wall ate the paint like a box of chocolate.....
CRITESS

[con]

dude random but halo 3 alot of ppl suks

[Takeout]

-Desire your throw ups are lookin damn good.
-Rave i'd say fill in your letters a bit more and widen the left side of your A so its a bit closer to the R.
-TESM lighten up your hand a bit to stop drips and definitely work on the outline for the force field.
-Cause i'd say try and work on your letters so they have a better flow. Also, once your caps come in work on some solid shadowing before working details.

[rave905]

k i had a kid claim that i bit that frum gettin up
which i didnt
but does ne1 else think it looks like those letters
i think those letters r way 2 simple 2 b stolen frum newhere lol

[Takeout]

The letters seem pretty simple. Honestly tell that kid to get off his high horse and quit eating shit.

[rave905]

already done lol its so funny

heres the whole convo
first he posted in the 905 thread
that a hollow i did what that same style was biten from gettin up n then i pm'd him

rave905-not even ur fuct
n keep that kinda shit 2 pm's man


nightwriter905-ur the one to talk u fuckin fruit wanna fight?

rave905-yo im always down 4 a fight if its 1on1
y dont u tell me who u r

nightwriter905-apparently ur 18 and madd small
im younger then u...

rave905-yo wtf is this who r u hearing this shit from
n who r u


nightwriter905-i aint saying shit all man
all i was saying was that u got ur hallow letters from getting up bro

rave905-wtf u mean ur not sayin shit all u fuckin called me a fruit n asked if i wanted 2 fight fuck u
n thier not frum that game man lol show me the pic frum gettin up then
u started beefin me bro so y dont u stop hiding behind a user name n tell who u fuckin r
pussy

nightwriter905-chill out man ill find u a flick of it and ill send it to u
and i just said wanna fight to say i aint no pussy
i was in the nav crew but that was like 2 yrs ago now thats all ima say bout myself
and bro i aint beefin just tellin yuh that u gotta switch up ur style cuz ppl were tellin me that u got ur throwy from gettin up so i was the one to break it to yuh and hold up ima find a flick of that throwy

rave905-lol y wont u tell me who u r
scared or sumthin
i dun hide behind a username


nightwriter905-i aint scared im just sayin

rave905-nah thats the point is ur not sayin

n then he never pm'd me ak