crits...
puttin up for a buddy ;-)
crits...
puttin up for a buddy ;-)
Originally Posted by B.S. POLICE
Can I get some crits please? My piece is back on page 1033 towards the bottom...
*PeeInTheShower*: I like it, is it Sheng or Skeng? I would make that a little more clear, but I like the colors and the letter form. Just make it a little cleaner and clearer and you should be good.
dub deuces, Baszma
Pee in shower, don't listen to baszma, sorry to burst your bubble, but it looks like abosolute shit. No bars, no structure, no flow, too small, bad can control, bad color combonations. Tell your "friend" to hit the blackbooks.
Ice age, I really like your 3D, wish you could have pulled off the auroa a little better and the M looks a little odd, kinda like part of the V structure's 3D isn't flowing right with the other half, unless its twisted, but your A is sick.
Lost, no bars, weird flow, shakey letters, odd structure and a bad handstlye, back to basics.
And to everyone else, please take into account if someone says "That shit is awesome!" ant they precieve to be toy, they may not have a full understanding of what makes something good or not.
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Ice Age- The baby's room looks great! Lucky girl.
Lost- Those Kin bombs are fucking TERRIBLE.. I'm sorry. I rarely say that to someone, but you shouldn't be trying to get noticable spots if you can't paint yet. Practice under a bridge or some shit. The handstyles are filthy too. (filthy bad...not filthy good...) sorry. Not trying to be mean. Trying to be honest so you don't get clowned. Have I seen worse? Yes... Was it on a rooftop? NOOOOOOOOO!
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u ruined heaven spots kin , better get up somewhere where ppl dont go , thats where i train so ppl dont see my toy shit.
i wasnt askin it to be done for me....i was simply asking for help.....dick
Reppin da 516.
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always down for some crazy shit.
wow wow wow. yeah his shit doesnt look the best ever. but dont dis him cuz of the spot he did. atleast he knows where to find good spots. toy or not, getting up everywhere will atleast get you noticed. and in the future hell get better and hell remember how to easily get back up those spots anyway.
id rather have a toy hitting up heaven spots so it gets me motivated to do better. id be thinking "wow...how the fuck is he doing that and not me?"
Lawlz im ignortant.
nah i hate when loads of spots are ruined by toyz(im toy too ) well toys should practice till get up , thats what i think , u cant change the way i think so...
will you guys stop talking about spots?
or stop talking period.
this is toy BOMB/PIECES.
not olick and bink1's philosophy 101
Last edited by ColdBlooded; 12-14-2008 at 03:40 PM.
thats not a heaven spot.. thats a rooftop. a plain old rooftop.
kin, work on your line work. keep all your lines nice an straight and it'll look that much better. do it bigger too. drop your knees rather than move your arm down.
peeintheshower, tell your buddy to cut back his outline. that gold overspray looks horrible. his lines are inconsistant as well. it looks small as hell, tell him to paint bigger.
the babys room looks sick. the penguins are well done. personally, i'd re-do the piece. the bubbles are poorly done and the colors arn't chosen well. when she's older and afraid of the boogeyman, the piece is prolly gonna bug her out. perhaps lighter, 'happier' colors would be a better idea. but thats my two cents.
L's much too tall.
try making your letters the same size, for one piece. see how it turns out.
alrighty.
snow is dope
lol comeon now. part of writing is figuring these kinda things out on your own.it feels good when you get it by yourself.do it yourself man,no ones gonna hold your hand
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dicks everywhere!
his L is pretty much the same size? its a balance on off scale. lol
snow is dope...
fucked up on the 3d
its still a tight piece jers. just the top left of the S looks a little too fat. good colors!
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Look who changed their K
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haha
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