@ MASE: Your letters have potential, but your A is covered by your M. And with the way the bar was set to run the bar on the A vanished. Pull that A out, and make it on it's own. Your letters have the potential for flavor, but they need to "Make love to each other." No homo. Your accents in your fill are nice, however clean up and cut the lines on the inside. It'll bang. Try and put more swing in that S. In turn, instead of dropping the line on that E straight down try to curve it to the right. So, it is close to the S.. but is all it's own. That random line coming up in the E on that middle bar.. cut or remove. Definitely drop a keyline on the outside. Even a fat ass outline would make this pop. The piece is right on the edge of a monster. Small attentions to detail would help this out, you're on point letter-wise in my opinion.
Yo man, if you're saying it looks like NEK.. Fix it man. And that picture, is shitty. I use dollar paint.. shit paint whatever. If you're using that, make it happen Cap'n. Feel me?
Cheers for the crits fellas, totally agree, need to work on putting somthing in my 3d,mite make me pay attention to detail a bit more. And the background was jus random cans I had, I normally go for a black n bronze background with the green letters but .. had a load half blues,
Crazy monster shit : )
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i think his letters are good and nice colors too
his letters r shit....
and i uno what he did on the three d, puttin lines in half of it then not touching n e thing else.
its clean though, kinda
Cheers for the input stuck, but I generally only take crits from people that are worth atleast half a wank... Personally, I'd rarther shit on my own head than make my graff look even an inch closer to your generic 'imtryingtoohardwithmywackextentions' look. Cheers tho
hahaha boooooooooooooooooooooom , sit the fuck down!! ( excuse this if u alreaddy are sitting)
quote : FREAKING RACK IT!!! YOU ARE 11 AND CRAFTY AND FAST, SO RACK YOUR PAINT SON! STORES ARE TOO FAR? RIDE YOUR BIKE SON, IF YOU GOT LOVE FOR THIS SHIT YOU WILL GET PAINT AT ANY COST!
i saw that too rewt, pm'd him earlier hah.... nice that he gets down with awal, zewler we hit a few cars together sometime nagle!
ahahaha danger w.e floats ur boat, just seeing some shitty stuff get its dick rode cause of lotsa colours in the background just pisses me off. and ill still burn u anyday paint or pencil
yeaaaa thanks rewt....and yeahhhh zook we definitely will sooner or later...
but yo dangeri, you said you aint gonna take crits from someone who aint worth half a wank? well i think im at a full wank....and you need to learn how to take crits. your letters ARE shit. you can paint good though, no one said anything about that...get off your high horse homie.
wait dangeri it says snot right
looks really clean, the 3d's lines are a little shaky, the colors are really green not necessarily a bad thing, yeah the letters look good nice work, you got some style going on
Nose 2 :: Not sat on any high horse chief, but can understand how it looks that way, and for that I do apologise, *last few times that clowns spoke to me he's given me shit 4 no reason, and I don't take shit from remedials. glad to see overseas have come around to the measurement of 'wanks' tho Lol. and I'm quite happy to take crits, always have been as long as they're not simply "his letters are shit" didn't even have the common decency to address me, jus aimlessly chatted to someone else about me, and hgrg :: as for you burning me, you couldn't burn a rag in a petrol station dude, but if u wanna play, take it to my inbox.
woney-dope bomb man purple fill is whatsup
rewt-sick your t is kinda small though dope shit
dangeri-work on colors rest is sick
Last edited by "awesome"ONE; 10-26-2010 at 07:30 PM.
good to see rewts still at it