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    Quote Originally Posted by yeah View Post
    ok where to start

    with the 3D you really shoulda put the lines connecting corners to the bottom, rather than having it all solid pale purple... it has no definition at the moment

    a keyline always helps pieces pop like crazy, maybe in this case i would have used that same pink that you used for the bits in the fill

    again, highlights help pieces pop like crazy. you'd be surprised how much of a difference they make, its worth the extra effort.

    the top part of the S doesn't line up at all, it goes from thin to thick for no reason.

    think thats all for now, just trying to give you a bunch of helpful crits.
    keyline ?? you mean second outline ?? i agree with the rest plus dont over do the designs..
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    Mase :: like y letters but I'd work on your 3d and defo go with a forcefield

    Freestyle in the local shop, think I like these s's better than my normal ones, crits plz


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    damn yo thats ill

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    Mase- looks good but yea get the lines goin in the 3d
    Snot- looks dope but the 3d could be a bit cleaner

    heres my throwies...



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    3mpolak- try hittin the black book for a bit and get ur shit to flow cause i just cant see it goin anywhere

    not to proud of this but w/e



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    well thanks for looking over my shit. btw which one is the best out of those. and another question what is flow? i keep hearing people talking about how a pice does/ or doesn't have flow, but i hae n idea what it means. and i DO black book. a lot. about 90% of my graffiti is blackbook

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    Quote Originally Posted by lord_plankton View Post
    keyline ?? you mean second outline ??
    same shit, call it what you want

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    Quote Originally Posted by 3mpolack View Post
    well thanks for looking over my shit. btw which one is the best out of those. and another question what is flow? i keep hearing people talking about how a pice does/ or doesn't have flow, but i hae n idea what it means. and i DO black book. a lot. about 90% of my graffiti is blackbook
    basically just same size letters and relitive style to the lettering, 6th downs the best.
    straight up and down like 6 o'clock

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    3mpolack all of those are terrible hit books and DO FUCKING SIMPS AND BARS
    If there is hope, it lies in the writers.

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    @ MASE: Your letters have potential, but your A is covered by your M. And with the way the bar was set to run the bar on the A vanished. Pull that A out, and make it on it's own. Your letters have the potential for flavor, but they need to "Make love to each other." No homo. Your accents in your fill are nice, however clean up and cut the lines on the inside. It'll bang. Try and put more swing in that S. In turn, instead of dropping the line on that E straight down try to curve it to the right. So, it is close to the S.. but is all it's own. That random line coming up in the E on that middle bar.. cut or remove. Definitely drop a keyline on the outside. Even a fat ass outline would make this pop. The piece is right on the edge of a monster. Small attentions to detail would help this out, you're on point letter-wise in my opinion.

    @ Woony..
    Yo man, if you're saying it looks like NEK.. Fix it man. And that picture, is shitty. I use dollar paint.. shit paint whatever. If you're using that, make it happen Cap'n. Feel me?

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    Cheers for the crits fellas, totally agree, need to work on putting somthing in my 3d,mite make me pay attention to detail a bit more. And the background was jus random cans I had, I normally go for a black n bronze background with the green letters but .. had a load half blues,

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    Crazy monster shit : )
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    i like what you're doin dangeri but you need to work on your letters dude.
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    i think his letters are good and nice colors too








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    his letters r shit....
    and i uno what he did on the three d, puttin lines in half of it then not touching n e thing else.
    its clean though, kinda
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    Cheers for the input stuck, but I generally only take crits from people that are worth atleast half a wank... Personally, I'd rarther shit on my own head than make my graff look even an inch closer to your generic 'imtryingtoohardwithmywackextentions' look. Cheers tho

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    hahaha boooooooooooooooooooooom , sit the fuck down!! ( excuse this if u alreaddy are sitting)
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    i saw that too rewt, pm'd him earlier hah.... nice that he gets down with awal, zewler we hit a few cars together sometime nagle!

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    ahahaha danger w.e floats ur boat, just seeing some shitty stuff get its dick rode cause of lotsa colours in the background just pisses me off. and ill still burn u anyday paint or pencil
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    yeaaaa thanks rewt....and yeahhhh zook we definitely will sooner or later...

    but yo dangeri, you said you aint gonna take crits from someone who aint worth half a wank? well i think im at a full wank....and you need to learn how to take crits. your letters ARE shit. you can paint good though, no one said anything about that...get off your high horse homie.
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    haha wtf does this has to do with an age??cause u older u think ur awesome or some shit??


 

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